hey, this is great! I (and don't hate me for saying it), but I like how you killed Jack

DUDE THIS STORY ROCKS MY SOCKS OFF TOTALLY

EVERYONE SHOULD READ IT

w00t!

I know this has been up for a while, but it deserves a review, no matter how late. Jack died, that made me sad but nonetheless, it was a great one-shot. Great lines and characterizations of the canon characters and new ones too! And definitely an original idea.

I LOVED IT

Oh. My. God.

Finally, I read a Brook/Rif-Raf fic, like I promised, and I am VERY happy I did.

So far, I think this is my favorite newsies fic I have read. Why? Well...

1) They stayed in charecter. FOR ONCE. You nailed each of the charecters SPOT ON (no pun intended.)

2) No whiny, girly, OC mary-sues. Just normal, happy (well, not always happy) OCs.

3) A plot other than: Girl gets abused. Meets newsies. They all love her. She falls in love and gets married.

4.) Just realy good. Even if Jacky DID die. Fantastic.

Now Kitty reviewed you, you gots to retoin da favah. Nah, just kidding. Wonderful

Well that was...depressing. lol It was good. I can't believe that happened to Jack but it was good. Original, that doesn't happen in most fics. How'd ya find all that Italian words? That made it very realistic. Poor Jacky Boy. Great job! It was very good. You are very talented. )

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I for one think that our story is great...