| Reviews for The Devil's Advocate |
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Arathelia chapter 10 . 11/9/2010 Why,oh why did you abandon this? I really think it is a unique and interesting concept. You have a wonderful writing style and I look forward to the rest of the story. |
PeacockTales chapter 10 . 11/8/2008 I love this fic :) Seriously, I'm so glad I read it, it's definitely my favourite fanfic ever, and I read many, many fics. You're very talented. It's very nicely in character and I really like how you tell the story from both points of view. So, you know how much I like it! I really hope you finish it or at least update? You've gotten me hooked :O |
deleted9 chapter 10 . 10/22/2008 OOh, this was the best chapter so far I believe! Very telling of his character and their relationship, I really enjoyed it a lot! |
Nelle07 chapter 10 . 10/17/2008 O! |
kaitlynvoncat chapter 10 . 10/14/2008 For some reason the idea of the Joker walking up all of those stairs with a bum ankle is really funny to me. I think I might be exaggerating it in my head though because I'm picturing him having to lift his entire left leg for each step. x3 Anyways, I hope you decide to update soon! |
ryuzaki25 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008 i really like this story so far so you should update soon! |
combatbabymeg chapter 1 . 9/1/2008 Write more! Looking forward to reading more of this story... |
SpiritFanNumber1 chapter 9 . 8/16/2008 ...wow! XD |
deleted9 chapter 9 . 8/16/2008 This was a wonderful chapter! You wrote the Joker so well, and I loved all the little nicknames that he gave Adria, it was great! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! |
PinkZebra chapter 9 . 8/16/2008 That was worth waiting for. XD.. Although I don't normally enjoy "situations" like those involving the Joker, as most others would, you made it understandable, believable and tasteful (not dwelling completely on ever little detail that would have been involved in telling their "night" together).. I really like how you left it up to the imagination of the reader :).. Can't wait for chapter 10, sounds like it will be more enticing then 9 - |
PinkZebra chapter 8 . 8/12/2008 Oh wow... I am so glad I gave this little number a go. From start to finish (meaning from chapter 1 through chapter 8) you had me on the edge of my computer seat, pining away at the end of every chapter. You have done a MARVELOUS job portraying the Joker's character, I can automatically imagine him acting out and speaking every action and word you've typed. You've done a spectacular job at placing the reader in the shoes of both the protagonist and the antagonist, allowing us to glimpse through their peripherals. I can almost conceive and ponder over every new swarm of emotion going through the leading female's (Adria) mind. And now here I am at the end of chapter 8 (sadly finding out that I will simply have to go without chapter 9 for a week or so) and I am practically yearning for the next chapter. I hate to bring this up, because as you stated in your homepage, you "rarely write fanfiction" I should savor and enjoy what you give the readers. Although the only complaint I have is that the chapters are much to short. Alas, I myself am not the author (or you for that matter), I cannot conceive your ideas for this fiction, or debate whether or not this is the way you enjoy creating. Hey you might not even have the time to write a couple pages worth of chapters, so I suppose I digress XD. I will have to wait till the next chapter comes out, but I insist and head this short but abrupt message ""I BEG YOU, PLEASE FINISH THIS FAN-FICTION!"" I hope you can also throw out another twenty chapters or so -;;.. But like I stated before, I'll have to wait and see till chapter 9, and please don't be off put-ed by my rather hyperactive pleas, sometimes I just can't help myself.. Take care and hope you have a safe journey to and from your where vacationing. :)) |
Aviarianna O Lorien chapter 8 . 8/11/2008 Oh what a way to end a chapter afer begining it with telling us all you'll be gone for a while. Good job! |
SpiritFanNumber1 chapter 8 . 8/11/2008 well, its getting dirty! XD anyway, i love this! i normally dont like ocs, but this is so good! i picture adria like harley! is she going to become her? cause she should! its a good idea! |
Sister Madly chapter 8 . 8/11/2008 Ooh, very nice, very nice indeed. How's Adria going to cope with this new development, I wonder? And is she ever going to escape or be rescued? Can't wait for these questions to be answered for me in the upcoming chapters! |
MuffinsNMalice chapter 8 . 8/11/2008 This story is very dark and intense, I like it. I'm totally going to die you you going on a trip though! I ned to know what happens! |