2020 an the story still without update

when is the next chapter!?

THAT WAS AMAZING!

I know it's probably unlikely, but I really hope you continue this story someday :)

Chels xoxo

Would love more! Please update soon!

Girl, I was thinking about you the other day. I don't know where you are or what you've been into, but your old writing buddy misses you.

This is a really good story ;)

This is supposed to be GT yet where is SSJ4, the arguably most powerful Saiyan transformation [SSJ4 Gogeta] in all of Dragon Ball even more so than SSJG, Vegeta ascended to SSJ4 with Bulma's Blutz Wave device, shouldnt he have regrown his tail by now. SSJ4 Vegeta would have no problem dealing with the Z Senshi, since Gohan cant control his Oozaru form he cant transform into a SSJ4 and his Mystic Form wouldnt even come close to Vegeta's power level, hell, the man trains every day, whose to say he hasnt surpassed 1000X Earth's normal gravity, not to mention the Hyperbolic Time Chamber gaining a year or 3 years worth of training in just three days, all that power combined with his intensive training in the gravity room nearly every day, unleashed and he could very easily overwhelm the Z-Senshi, Trunks and Goten are still at SSJ, their fusion into Gotenks wouldnt even turn the tide, SSJ3 is outclassed in every way by SSJ4, Kakarot would be the only opponent to match Vegeta's prowess as a SSJ4, the only threat

Tender and Loving then Cold as the antarctic ice cap the next

love the story, has to be my favorite pan based story so far, keep up the good work.

oh that was good!

wow this sexy nice i like it

i love it!

love it! please update!

Okay. So, there is something SO WRONG about an unfinished fan

fic...especially one as amazing as this one. Should you ever decide

to finish it, I will be waiting to enjoy it!

XDDDDD