Reviews for Rites of Passage
Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 11/22/2017
Married life and fatherhood sit well on Lee. To see the dreams of his own lost childhood come true for his delightful, energetic son has an all-is-right-with-the-world feeling of coming full circle. Lee & Amanda's enduring love has created a wonderful home for their children.
Marie chapter 1 . 11/25/2001
Wow. I obviously have to find the rest of your stories in order to read the rest of this universe. Just wonderful. A very plausible look at the future without being sacharine.
Merel chapter 1 . 11/24/2001
Mary, your writing always amazes and annoys me. Amazes me in that I can't believe how ON TARGET you are with the characters and the emotions they are going through... annoyed because, while I love to read angst, I could never write it... and never, ever write it as well as you. Now get a move on and get with the next part in this wonderful group of stories.
Rangerbaldwin chapter 1 . 11/21/2001
I don't know what the 'with or w/o you series is' but that's ok. This was a great story. I loved the mention of Matty's hazel eyes. I just wish it was an even longer story.

Ranger B.
rsfanatic chapter 1 . 11/13/2001
A very nicely written story! I really enjoyed this.
kethren chapter 1 . 11/10/2001
Very well written. It is a nice view of our favorite spy family!
Maggy chapter 1 . 11/6/2001
Nicely done!

It's concise, it's full of details, it's got a strong sense of "relationships"- and it proceeds nicely to a satisfying close.

I thoroughly enjoyed it and recommend it heartily for a quick little"Stetson family fix."
ec chapter 1 . 11/5/2001
"...A short story set in the 'With Or Without You' universe..."

And a very nice universe it is too.

Thanks for a very nice story.