| Reviews for Behind Criminal Lines |
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Guest chapter 9 . 6/8/2014 Wow, just wow. This is by far the most amazing fanfiction I've ever read. Words cannot express just how amazing this is. The story is compelling and realistic, the characters are perfect, and the descriptions? Unbelievable. |
Miko chapter 9 . 1/20/2011 I love this storey so far! Please finish it! Good job keeping Joker real. :D |
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 9 . 1/7/2011 Wow...this is good shit, lol hope your still writing it and looking forward to reading more soon. . |
behappy101 chapter 10 . 11/14/2008 Excellent character development and story you have going here. It's finally nice to have a story that deals with the mentality of the people instead of just raw actions. I love your portrayal of the Joker and can easily imagine him engaging in all of this nonchalant murder. I'm exceedingly enjoying this! Please continue. -behappy101 |
Deathcab4kimmie chapter 10 . 11/2/2008 I totally understand and I will be there to read the next chapter. I'll be reading until the very end, lol that sounds dramatic. But school is more important and people need to understand that you do have a life and you can't be sitting around, writing this up and leaving your school work to pile up (I know what it's like, I have the same problem. Lovely school). But don't fret, post it when you are able to. I can't wait. -Deathcab4kimmie |
Zeppie chapter 10 . 11/2/2008 :0 WOW the preview! Cant wait for the next chapter! -Ellie |
Dragonsinger13 chapter 10 . 11/1/2008 I can't wait till you post this chapter! Please do so soon! ;p |
Not Human chapter 6 . 10/6/2008 Oh, wonderful! Batman would be a welcome guard over me, if I were in her position. And to watch Violet have to swallow her own violence in the face of the Joker - awesome. |
Not Human chapter 5 . 10/4/2008 Your Joker is pretty wicked, in every sense of the word! I'm glad to see you're not pulling any punches, and I don't remember if I already said I like Violet/Lacey or not so I'll say it now: I really like your OC. She's strong, smart, flawed, and everything a compelling character in an M rated fic should be. Good work! |
Not Human chapter 1 . 10/2/2008 Okay, looks promising. I'm going to read all the rest at once and review here and there, k? So far it looks awesome; well-written, interesting storyline. Good character in Violet! She's not pansy at all. I like her! |
Dragonsinger13 chapter 9 . 9/21/2008 This chapter was realy cool! I loved the way she just started to become Lacey, how Violet died and most likly won't be comming back! Great job! Can't wait for the next update! See you then! ;p |
put here 2 feel joy chapter 9 . 9/16/2008 Sounds like Violet is nearly dead or maybe whats left of her can only hold on for the ride now. I loved how you described Violet trying to take control of Lacey. :D The Joker really is changing her whether he realizes it or not. I hope there's lots of Joker in the next chapter. haha I missed him in this one. I think it's kind of ironic that Lacey got so mad at Jared because she's basically working (happily) for the Joker herself. I think that the killing scene could have been more descriptive. You know me and my details. You gotta have'em! lol But otherwise everything was very good and I can't wait until the next chapter! I'll be working on mine as much as I can so I can get it out for you soon. ~Liz |
Zeppie chapter 9 . 9/14/2008 VERY VERY very good chapter:D Loved it very well written Cant wait for the next update and I no how you feel my chapters for my story 'A Joker's Revenge' are being written in lessons and at weekends so good luck finding time to do your next chapter -Ellie |
Zeppie chapter 8 . 9/14/2008 Love this please continue :D -Eloisa |
SkyKissed chapter 8 . 8/23/2008 My dear, your story is so very lovely it's hard to put into words. You seem to have Mr. J down to a T, and your OC is very good. The detail is always exceptional and I find myself waiting eagerly for the next update. I kinda ashamed I didn't favorite this earlier! Please update soon! Sky |