i don't know what to think about Jaguar
Alex defineatly did the right thing sending hayley and emma away
thier relationship (alex,hayley,& emma) will blow up in alex's face either they find out and like jack & tom accept it and constantly worry about him or they will get so fed up with the lies they rage at him and leave.

Oooo can you please write more? Personally I think jaguar should find out everything that has happened to Alex and feel really bad and I would love for Emma and Hayley to find out who Alex rider really is by sneaking off to check on him when Alex goes somewhere to check his brace or something like that. This story is amazing!

I think Jaguar is a very messed up person. I'm towards bad because he has something against Alex that just screams Scorpia to me.
I think Alex was right to send the girls since he wants to keep the SECRET part of the title Secret Agent.
I have no clue, but I hope they warm up to each other and become friends.
If you didn't notice, I like your story!
Please keep updating!

That was beautiful

I think Jaguar is a good guy (as in not Scorpia) with some problems
Yes
I quite like EmmaxAlex if that's the kinda 'relationship' you're thinking about. Hayley as the little sister to Alex, cuz I kinda feel like that's happening.

WHALES! WTAF it's Wales not an animal that's probably bigger than the place tbh...sorry bout that...patrianism...is that even a word...anyway...pride of homeland

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS YOU DON"T KNOW HOW MANY STORIES I'VE GONE THROUGH THAT NEVER ENDED... Please... One more chapter I beg you.

That was really great! I hope you continue this one day :)

Wow~ spectacular~

Nice writing; hope you continue this.

Nicw job. Don't collect my soul.

Alex did the right thing by sending the girls out of the room. Alex and the girls relationship, I think will end up like Tom and Alex's. Jaguar could be either a good guy or a bad guy depending on the circumstances he had for doing what he did to Alex. For instance, if he did what he did so that Alex might have to go and stay in the infirmary which might have been the safest place for him, would make Jaguar a kind-of good guy, but if he did it because he didn't like children or because he didn't want Alex to be in the SAS then that would make him more of a bad guy but you could make it a lot more complicated then that so that he has more than one or two reasons which might make it more interesting. For example, if we use the good guy instance and say that he is Jerry Harris and he wanted Alex out of the SAS because then maybe MI6 wouldn't use him, (pretend that Tom told him everything) or something like that than Jaguar had good intentions even if he might have gone about them in the wrong way.
Hope this is useful and gives you some inspiration if you are going to continue this amazing story!
Good luck! -

I shall love to keep my soul another day (;

Nice! I like this so far!

Please update loving this story its by far the best Alex ride fanfic i have read and I have read hundreds of thousands...