Okay it seems like some sick shit of Naruto being controlled into destroying or helping to destroy Konoha happened.

He doesnt remotely come off as Kage strength. Going back and forth I thought he was going for Naruto x Yuna & Lulu. It would cause issues to flirt repeatedly with both then drop one and date the other while traveling together.

Little easier to pull off both when both are already extremely close and you're fighting side by side risking your lives on a quest to save the world you may very well not survive.

Why is he reacting so damned badly to SIN when he could shrug off Kyuubi by that point with no fucks given.

He had no attacks that can reach with elemental jutsu or able to get over by her basic magic can?

And how the hell was her basic fire spell not obliterated by his cyclones?

Still hasnt checked himself out to try to figure out his problem.

Otherwise good chapter.

I'm confused. First it's not bad but, again I'm confused.

Hn.
Fire jutsu.
Sword.

Then while normally I wouldnt have much issue with him missing flying enemies with kunai. These are the basic of the basic weakest mobs and Wakka is hitting them with a freaking ball. Hes throwing high speed pointy metal knives with a fair amount of skill.

Worse than that even when in range hes repeatedly missing these birds swooping right by him when he should be fairly damn fast. I dont get it.

Also strange hes blushing and talking about no promises towards Yuna yet has no reaction to Lulu but that's not as off as the above.

Now hes panting over a shirt bit of training it seems.. is he still having issues and cant get his strength back I'm wondering.

Why isnt he checking himself out for damaged chakra channels or something if hes still having chakra issues the next day?

Naruto? Really? That was absolutely sasuke that's being written about wtf?

Please continue thinking story because it's really good

Why is Naruto using fire style jutsu? That's not his affinity.

I am looking forward to chapter 8 and I hope Naruto gets Kurama the nine tail fox to fight Sin.

Pair Naruto with both Lulu and Yuna

I am looking forward to chapter 8 and I hope Naruto challenge Sin to a fight with full power of Kurama the nine tail fox.

I feel you could have described the two tails state a bit more at the end. I say this cause it didn't seem to have that much of an affect on him. Whenever you've described him using Kyuubi's chakravartin it has always been when he's angry. I know this is fanfiction and all but try describing how he feels while under the influence of Kyuubi's chakra. I do enjoy the story and am greatly looking forward to future chapters.

Hope u decide to update soon

hmm, im a little worried that his Chakra isn't recovering... wait, Naruto has near unlimited Chakra to start with, he can easily throw around S-Rank jutsu all day and not be all that tired, i mean he can make 1000's of clones and doesn't really even feel any drain at all and most jonin can only make around 3-5 from what i can gather

hmmm... either chakra is strengthened by drawing and converting natural chakra to restore chakra on Naruto's normal scale, or his chakra is being suppressed by the latent magic in the air. only ones I got on why Naruto's so chakra drained.

Hey I just read all the chapters really loving it! Hope you update soon with more chapters please dont give up on this story! :)