wonderful story. Very well done I like Caspian's POV it was well done considering the amount of insecurity's he'd be having too. Thanks for writing hope you write more, maybe next time something longer than a one shot?

Wildfire

At first I thought this would be just a retelling of what went on in the movie, but you really went deep into all the characters to show what their behavior meant. You made a great choice to show this scene from all three points of view: you did justice to all three of the guys. I love the way you showed Edmund's "save it for later" as an affirmation that he felt there would be a "later" for Peter. One of my favorite moments in the movie was Edmund's remark to Peter to keep smiling, and Peter's response of raising his sword triumphantly and "smiling" (as best he could) to raise the morale of the Narnians. I'm glad you included that from several points of view. Caspian's realization that Miraz could have learned more about kingship from Peter was also very lovely. Good job!

that was cool. I've seen a few fics the "Chanellge scence" in Edmunds' and Peters' POV,but had yet to see it in Caspians' done on all three boys POV's. I would love to see more of your writing Narnia Fics.