| Reviews for Captured |
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MUTO TOHO chapter 1 . 4/5/2016 Why are people saying that this is epic? It's boring as hell. Also it was incredibly pointless. Like why was Maka captured in the first place? Why did Medusa just let her go?Why does Medusa have Maka's memory wiped, well ok I know the answer to that but still. Also like I said WHAT WAS THE POINT OF CAPTURING MAKA IF MEDUSA WAS JUST GOING TO LET HER GO AND WIPE HER MEMORY OF THIS EVENT ANYWAY!? IT MAKES NO SENSE! The stuff with Maka and Crona would have been cute if Maka didn't keep kicking the poor guy away and constantly insulting him. I mean I know why she's hard on him, he is the reason why Soul has a scar. But it's not entirely Crona's fault. Crona was just doing his job and it's obvious that he means well. But this fanfic I would not recommend to anybody that much, I give it a 5/10. |
Kodani chapter 1 . 3/29/2015 "He heard his weapon cackle behind him and sighed, there was really nothing he could do when it came to him." That's funny, I cackle, too, and that's how you tell I enjoy a joke. My cackle isn't evil, but it sounds like it and it WILL scare the shit out of you. |
Her Highness1 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014 Love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 This story was fantastic. I loved it you should continue to write other stories. |
Little Snuggle chapter 1 . 8/22/2012 Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic Epic This was epic! I love it! I can't express my thoughts in words right now XO I wish it was longer *sigh* |
Nate chapter 1 . 7/25/2012 More |
RobinxRaven writer chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 I loved this! It had the potential to be a multi chapter, but works just as good as a one shot c: |
The Reality DumPer chapter 1 . 2/22/2012 just p0sted to say I read it. |
Tae Fansick chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 damn chrona had one hell of a pick-up line there! "are all girls this pretty or is it just you?" lol total cuteness! |
path of dawn chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 kawaii |
CupidsCurse chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 Awwww! How kute, poor crona-kun, hopelessly in luv.. |
maple the wacky tree chapter 1 . 6/5/2010 that was . . . bizarrely cute. something about it was really appealing. and i'm glad you made chrona a boy. it seemed to fit better. "… you're… I-I didn't know girls were so pretty… o-or is it just you?" is that supposed to be a pick-up line, chrona style? pfft! i laughed my head off when i read that part. |
sora12212 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010 Ohh...I like this!...I wich you would update it... |
flour-chan xXx SSS chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 col! 3 |
OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 pretty good |