Loved this story!

is the young girl Harley Quinn?

What were the documents? What did they contain? What is the motive? I MUST KNOW!

This was a great sorry, moving in to the sequel now

I like your fiction !

I keep on thinking that shes gonna get raped but it never happens...

damn

I find it really annoying when writers write when they are changing pov's there really isn't any need when you can clearly see it without the subtitle. Also if you think about it every book is written in either 1st 2nd or 3rd person so there is no need to have other people's points of views here there and everywhere.

Okay - I thought maybe I had reviewed this a while ago but apparently I didn't. I've read this story several times now (I enjoy it just as much each time!) and I hopped into the reviews just to look around and I saw a review from "Four-Eyed Koi" from Jan 2015 on page 1 and it was suddenly imperative that I leave a review telling you to ignore everything that person said.

Seriously. They couldn't be more wrong. Apart from saying everything they said in a condescending/asshole kind of way, they also are simply incorrect. I see a lot of annoying reviews on stories I love and I generally don't say anything but I was legit considering messaging them before I realized that would be too aggressive and I have no desire to get into some kind of internet fight (even if the very concept of a Mary Sue is irritating in itself - completely separate from the essay I could write on how even if we could all agree on what such a term meant (overpowered? too likable? doesn't have enough flaws?), these types of characters would still be important and valid and I can write/read about an overpowered awesome person all I want if it makes me happy and you are under no obligation to read it) so I am leaving this review instead. To say, I like this story. I like this character. I enjoy reading it (and subsequently rereading it). The pacing...the whatever else they complained about. I liked all that. So! Please don't take anything they said to heart and don't let it get you down. For every person who doesn't like your writing there is someone like me reading on their phone late at night because they enjoy it so much it doesn't matter that it's 3am, they have to finish!

I love your writing, and I was so happy with the finished piece, I need a good fanfic once in a while. Thank you.

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Sorry, but I agree with the big long scathing reviewer. I have trouble believing in your characters and your Joker either copies Heath's word for word, or is really out of character. Read about 8 chapters in, but I just couldn't get into it.

AMAZINGGG i read it ovr a milliON times now

STILL REALLY AWESOME experience!
-Sycx Assassin

This story keeps getting better and better!
Sycx Assassin