GAAAHHHHH How CUTE! Made me squeal like a little girl! Gah what a beautiful alternative ending! *Squeals and rolls around happily*

YES! YOU NEED TO TAKE OVER YUGIOH AND REWRITE THE WHOLE SIERES! Honestly best 'how it should have ended ' I've read GJ!

I love this! i know its a one shot but could you add one more chapter. i really want to know what happens next! good job on the story though. i thought the voice was going to say: sacrifice Yugi to stay here or return to the after life to save him. my heart was pounding! thanks alot for this though. just the kind of story i needed today! keep up the good work!

i loved it thats what should have happend

This was way, way, WAY better! Thank you! Now my soul can fanaly rest in peace.

I really quite liked this. The only thing that didn't seem realistic even for Yu-Gi-Oh! was the random voice. It would have been better to make the spirit of Atemu's father walking through the doors or something. But I really do wish the series had ended this way. Oh, and I liked the addition of your deck. It was really neat to read.

Aawwww, I agree, they should have gotten to stay together at the end.

I LOVE IT! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) PLEASE read my prologue of a story , go to my profile and read it please :-)

omg i have the volcanic hammer to! and like this ending a lot better too.

BEST. STORY. EVAAAAAAAAAR! _ yes this is a way better ending _

luv this

i totally approve of this ending. it didnt make me cry...seriously, i started crying at the end of the final episode..._ it was just so heartbreaking...Atemu literally just went and DIED for gods sake!

so yeah..i approve of this ending -gives a thumbs up-

I approve! D 3

of course you did you wrote it, it was enjoyable though, very good battle descrption.