That ending! Very well done :)

I wish this is how the series had actual ended, it's sad but I feel that it would have worked really well as a bittersweet ending, the fire lord defeated, the world saved but Zuko dies. It also would have made a bit more sense since Katara was only able to save Aang with mystic water from the oasis otherwise lightning is supposed to be lethal.

Good writing, but you can't kill Zuko off. It just doesn't work that way.

Lol, I have to admit, that while Zuko is one of my favorite characters, that was the perfect set-up for his death. Technically, he shouldn't have even survived. I'm pretty sure Aang was close to death or even dead already when struck by the lightning, and only the spirit water brought him back; Zuko was actually struck right in the chest, next to his heart, so really he should have died right then.

I would have loved to see the Gaang's reactions.

*shots lightning at you* you shall die!

I had a similar thought as I watched the end, but you wrote it much better than I could have. I don't know how to write death. That was really well written.

-Dyslexic Nerd

beautiful. but really, people need to write the gaang's reaction more.

Zuko is my favourite character, but i completely agree with you. A death in the finale would have been a lot better.

Great story. :D

That was the most touching fic I've ever read. *cries*

Seriously! Jet is allowed to die(even if he is a jerk) but Zuko isn't? It would have been a very sad, but memorable ending. But it is a kids show...

AW i love this i hoped someone would do a good re-write of this scene & u'v done it wonderfully though it was a lil unclear as to right when Zuko died & i'd have loved to see the slightest bit more interaction between Zuko & Katara but all in all a great fic _

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I like you ending. As much as I like the hapy endng of the Avatar the last Airbender, Zuko should have died at the end and there should also be Katara forgiving him for what he did. It would have been better and showed the realities of war with the death of Zuko.

But I guess since Avatar the last airbender is a kid's show, the creators wouldn't want the children to see that.

oh... *sobs*, alright, i did read the summery so i'm not allowed to kill you.

that was so sad, i swear i wanted to kill myself... don't worry, i'm not going too.

ok, that was sad that you chose to kill Zuko. i don't think the series would be the same without him, but for a one-shot or something that's not going to go on too long afterward, it's a perfect crime, huh? even i'm not innocent; i've pulled this one before.

ok, loved the ending with Katara starting to take out her anger on Azula and then that was PERFECT the way you had Zuko going back to Ursa. but... yea, that last sentence could've been worded a little better. all the same, great job.

keep it up.

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