I really loved this story-well, until the unfortunate end. D; Haha, but what I liked: you do a really good job of showing the relationship and closeness with Bakura and Ryou. You made them into believable friends without Ryou being too much of a girl, etc! I totally love their weird hair jokes and the fork thing. I about died when Bakura said, "I've been telling the truth! I'm lonely and failing school!" Haha, you paint such a lovely picture of them! They make such cute frends and oh. :D I just dig!

Bakura's behavior after he finds out about Ryou's lady is a little bizarre! And! I really don't like that Ryou's wife is nameless, but I am sure you made her out to be a pretty much bland character. It is nice though to see that Ryou is torn between both, and not just dating his wife just because-as in, he doesn't immediately jump Bakura's bones!

I hope you write more of this or something else! ;

Er ... making Ryou come after Bakura for comfort is overrated .. and Ryou's nameless wife's cooking is wonderful. Tell her that XD

Anyways .. make Bakura feel envy or something since he is a dark figure. Make him become ... evil and make Ryou change him back :) Happy ending :) You're the author anyways :D