Wow. This was amazing.
I had to resist murderious urges towards you a few times - especially when Fiyero left, in the beginning, and of course when I thought you were killing Elphaba - but I'm glad I did resist them, because I really liked the ending, and I loved the Fiyeraba fluff in it, and therefore I forgive you for nearly giving me heart attacks and making me cry several times throughout this story :D. Seriously, you have a gift. Keep writing forever or I'll let my murderious urges carry me away. You've been warned ;-).

Well what was Fiyero expecting after the way he left her? She would just gratefully fall back into his arms and all would be okay again? Of course she is going to be cold and distant, I would be too!

You just broke my heart. Like, I'm actually crying right now. Don't be sorry; it just shows how well you can emotionally affect your readers. But I really, really, really hope that they find their way back to each other because, in the words of Glinda: "They deserve each other." Corny, yes, but also true. ;-)

Absolutely loved the story! You did a great job of keeping everyone in character while providing an engaging plot.

Gabriel was almost too good to be true to the point of was wandering early on if he would turn out to be a traitor to Glinda and Elphaba, but I'm glad he was not.

Will be sure to read your other Wicked stories soon as time allows. Thank you for this story!

How the bloody hell have I NOT read this story before now?

THIS IS EPIC.

You almost made me cry there, when Elphaba locked Fiyero in the room and I realized Elphie was gonna die.

But then you introduced Morrible, and I said to myself: "Wait a second . . ."

AND I LOVE THISSTORY IT'S AWESOME. I love the character interactions, how you toyed with their emotions, it was so painful but so incredibly realistic. I live for that stuff!

Well, it is currently 12:30 a.m, thank you for keeping me up all damn night with your stupidly awesome and wonderful story. I need to work in six hours. I hate you (grumble grumble)

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Aw... you seemed to have thought this through alot... i'm going to keep reading.

I finally got the chance to read the last chapter and I loved it. That was a wonderful way to end this story. Thanks for taking the time and sharing this! I look forward to reading your other stories :).

sigh, perfect ending, and morrible SO deserves it! Not that I condone capital punishment but...yeah she's a biatch. Noice ending, I hope to read more of your stuff in the future :)

This was a great story I enjoyed reading it!

I KNEW IT! She IS preggy!

That was cute! Great job!

Thank Oz, Elphaba is ok :) I couldn't have asked for anything more. I was terrified to read this chapter, thinking she actually was dead, but phew :) I enjoyed this story so much :D I am going to miss reading it D: It was so amazing. Fantastic job! I'll be on the look-out for more of your stories :D

Loved it! AMAZING!

:( I'm sure there is a twist coming up. This chapter was heartbreaking really. Fiyero being locked away, the pain Glinda is going through, Elphie ugh! Morrible freaks me out. I'm scared to see what she has up her sleeves.

NO! I am crying so hard Elphaba can't die she is too good. Poor Glinda and Fiyero. I SO SO SO CAN'T wait till the next chapter!