| Reviews for Captured! |
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AUehara chapter 8 . 1/15/2013 Aw, but I find Lucario becoming egg cute xD Alright, he's dead, but that was still cute! I liked this story! .Atsuko Uehara |
Silent-Sarcasm chapter 8 . 3/2/2012 Me likey. but i didnt know lucario love chocolate |
Mysteryfan17 chapter 8 . 5/20/2010 I was gonna say how cool it was that you explained Lucario's position/curcumstances of being on the mountain. Saving Red the way he did, wow, I got goosebumps...then to have him fade away after defeating Tabuu (which my sister and I have yet to succeed at, even considering we tagteam him) like the movie...I cried at the movie, and I have barely kept from...nope...I'm crying now. Oh well. This story was very well written and I can guess where to line it up with the others you have done. 10/10 |
hawktakesflight chapter 8 . 8/4/2009 Hey there Shadow, I don't believe it, I haven't reviewed this yet! I think there's enough been said, this is an awesome fic. Lucario was really well portrayed and so was his relationship with Red - it was really sad during the Subspace portion, too... Once again, this is an awesome job. Keep it up! hawk |
Chessure chapter 8 . 7/14/2009 NO! WHY? :*( |
PotatoBoy chapter 8 . 12/28/2008 I WANT A LUCARIO PLUSHIE NOW! |
Stonerpikachu chapter 8 . 10/31/2008 Aw... now time to read the sequel. Good story, I really liked it. You made a couple mistakes though in some past chapters such as when Red walked by Lucario (I think it was after his little cold or something) you said "started" when it should have been "stopped" Also... I'm not so strict about this one but "sweat-dropping" as in the anime thing, is not really a verb and its kind of annoys me when it is used as such (although there is no substitue for it yet which is why I'm not so strict about it) Good work. |
Stonerpikachu chapter 4 . 10/31/2008 Well that's wikipedia ;D Anyways, I should have read this sooner... its pretty funny. Next. |
Stonerpikachu chapter 2 . 10/31/2008 hehe aww poor Lucario. Must read on to see what happens... |
Rikorisu chapter 8 . 10/20/2008 WAH! YOUR STORY WAS SO SAD! And good at the same time. I cried at the end of the story. T.T It touched my heart... |
twilight prince32 chapter 8 . 8/21/2008 amazing story, sad ending(but not a bad one). I'd never thought about the fact that the other pokemon are probably wild pokemon. |
Papersak chapter 8 . 8/15/2008 Wah, he died? D: Aww... But yay you like borrowed my idea. :3 |
Azure-Link chapter 8 . 8/14/2008 How could you do this to lucario and the pokemon trainer! I like those two~ Especially Lucario. I should hunt you down for that! But I have to admit it was pretty good ending. Thou I wish it could have go another way. No offense. Nice fic! |
Gelert111 chapter 7 . 8/11/2008 Aw... Poor Lucario! D Nice story though. D |
Papersak chapter 7 . 8/1/2008 O, I love when people explain this stuff. Then that's why Red lost two of his Pokemon. Nice-age. x) Hmm. The only thing left to ask is who took Lucario to the mountain? King Dedede, since he apparently knows what's going on? :0 Another mystery... Aww, that's kinda sad, then. It's like the end of Red 'n Lucario's relationship. You could have an epilouge kinda thing where it's like a while later they meet and feel like they remember something but they don't. :( -pats them- |