SA will always be

"And no, S/R is BETTER. :)"

No, it is NOT.

S/A IS better. And S/A/R (a. k. a. "ISrafel Special") is the best.

Wow. This must be one of the earliest Peggy Sue Evangelion fics.

Unfortunately, it's nothing compared with the most popular Peggy Sue fics (Higher Learning, Re: Take, Once More With Feeling, The Second Try, Samsara, Doing It Right This Time, NGE: Mitigation, Unbroken...), and it died right before reaching the interesting parts (when Asuka comes along), but nice effort.

Damn you! I was totally looking forward to the Asuka Strikes chapter. Damn you for letting this interesting peggy-sue fic rot. Seriously? You couldn't update it in 10 years? Arghhhhhhhkfkgodsbjaw9gwagjr jgihs

shame this fic was left to rot its really good

I don't know why you lost that spark but i think 4 years is enough to get it back, So get your ass in gear and start writing more chapters. Since you and grammar mistakes go so well together if you need a Pre reader just PM me.

cool

Very interesting plot. But a little confusing. Try using the character's name instead of he/she/him/her sometimes like at the begining of scenes or when a character speaks for the first time in the scene. That should help.

ai rely rely like your story vhen you update

So, wheres the rest of the story? This story should be continued, for it is good.

finish this fc like you promised

Good fic. I hope you'll update this soon as you haven't updated this in over two years.

-Knight Two

This one looks nice. Good plot, but I see it hasn't been touched for quite some time. Updates, please?

An excellant update soon.

UPDATE DAMN IT, UPDATE!