Reviews for Broken
Blue chapter 12 . 3/21
Your kids are kind of grown-ish, now, right!?
Guest chapter 12 . 9/8/2019
I thought I read all the quil Claire stories there are some several times bit apparently not. This was a work of art. I cried the 1st 2 chapters. i mean sobbing so bad I couldn't see. I liked how Claire said she knew desperation and the story behind it. it wasn't just words for her. your story has real good flow. I really liked it and hope you eventually come back to write more to it but if youre not able to at least it stopped at a good spot.
nalaniekeala chapter 12 . 7/22/2019
Hello! I just found this story again and I’m kind of sad to see it’s still a WIP. I really hope you’ll finish it someday now that the littles are older!
GreekLia chapter 12 . 6/30/2019
still love this story! can you update please?!
RLNTonks chapter 12 . 5/23/2019
Hi! I'm still here, still in love with your story, I dont even ship the ship but your characters came alive, and even though it's been about 10 years, I still hope one day you'll come back and finish their story. I always loved how original it was, the tension, everything was perfect. So if you ever come back, I just wanted you to know I've never forgotten your story, I still love it, and I still hope to see it finished one day!
Gillian2892 chapter 12 . 4/27/2019
Thank you so much for this story! Please please keep writing!
takethis2urgrave chapter 11 . 4/5/2019
Finish the bloody story! Please. I've just re-read it hoping you'd added some, but it still isn't finished and I need it to be! I know it's been years since you wrote this, but please finish it. For me?
Jacque of Twilight chapter 12 . 8/27/2018
Would love to see this completed
Kageyjay chapter 12 . 8/20/2018
Well. So your babies are older. So maybe you could write a little bit more of this for us?
I have liked everything you've written. You are very talented.
I hope you are still writing wherever you are.
Kageyjay chapter 8 . 8/20/2018
I know it's been quite a while. Congratulations!
I hope after 9 years you still feel the same. :D
No, really I love every day that I have with my kids, and I expect you have also.
pbadeaux10 chapter 12 . 5/7/2018
Wow! Such a great story! I really, really hope you still plan on finishing!
loluchan chapter 12 . 4/22/2018
pls continue zissss
RLNTonks chapter 12 . 4/3/2017
Wow! I can't believe the sheer number of years its been! I hope you find this again one day and come back to it. After all these years this is still one of the best pieces I've ever read-I don't even ship these two, never have, but THATS how AMAZING your writing is-that and the fact that I've never forgotten this story. I hope one day you will find it and come back to it. You don't even need to be into twilight still, just think of it as borrowing everyones names cause you've basically made it all your own anyway. You have a real talent and if you never continue this, I do hope you re-take up writing one day. I know your kids are pretty grown now, somewhere around double digits at LEAST! It's been YEARS! (Dude I was a freshman in high school when you left off). Please finish this one day 3 Or at least take it as a compliment that I'm still here waiting and hoping 3 #thehighestofcompliments
newtonkatelyn2 chapter 12 . 1/24/2017
I've been on a Quil and Claire kick lately and this by far my favorite one I've read. I am hoping that you will finish it one day, but until then I guess it's up to my imagination:)
Ms. Anonymous chapter 12 . 11/13/2016
Fun fact,

Ever since I went on a Quil/Claire kick after being fascinated by the allusions to them in Breaking Dawn, I have loved your story. This narration of a much older, wiser, and yes, broken Claire immediately captivated me. The very canon compliant characterization of Emily and the whole part makes my heart happy. And of course - the gentle but sudden, expected but strained healing our dear, star-crossed imprints. About once a season, I'm reminded of a feeling or image or phrase that you've articulated, and while I only endeavor to check for a 13th chapter, I always find myself following the whole journey once again. So. I thank you for how far you've taken us, and remain ever hopeful for more.

Best wishes to you and your family!
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