I forgot to mention in chapter 16 but what about Bryan and garland did they ever get a kid? And you didn't talk (well...wrote)about dranzer and dark gargoyle's kid.

I bet it is a girl too. Great story.

It was so good

That's a lovely story and it's nice to see Tyson doesn't get his own way.

cute what is it going to be a girl or a boy can't wait to know
I want to see more about Bryan and Garland and of course our Miguel and Kai

so cute

Loved it
Now will see Bryan X Garland
I want to know what would Miguel say when he knows the truth

They are so adorable together
Now what will happen but one thing I know Bryan x Garland

So cute

Loved it

Loved it
They so fit together
I loved the other pairs too

Go Kai go Kai
I loved it
The role of Tyson is sure goes with him I don't hate him though

WOOT! I can't believe it's actually finished, this was a great story! I guess since this story is done I can't bug you about updating it anymore, however your other stories I will continue to bug you about.

So please update your other stories as well, I simply love your stories!

Burning _

I'm so sad to see the story end. But I love the ending. It's so sweet and cute! -

omg i loved it! so soood it ends :( but love the happy ending!