| Reviews for Invincible |
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  seaweed chapter 1 . 2/4/2016 this is my first reading of a car chase! this was a good job! |
 Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 4/30/2015 And if Tsuna was there, and probably can guess what Yamamoto think, he would be like "Don't like it That Way !" so frustrated and desperately. lol Awesome Car Chase Fic ! xD Very Well Described ! Awesome ! Love it ! |
| corintios chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 omggggg hahaha even I got excited! I absolutely adore car chases! |
| Lordess Meep chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 You had me with your summary. As hopelessly as I love 8059 fics, I LOVE their gen fics as well. And, god, you write their dynamics so brilliantly, especially the frantic pace! Personally, I like how you've gotten inside Yamamoto's head - it's a brilliantly cracky place to be. I died at the "Ha ha, Italian." (Italian Job) bit and at how impressed he is with everything despite being in the middle of such high octane action. Loved it! - Lordess Meep |
| Hieiko chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 Ooh car chase! And I love the mention of "The Italian Job". Haha, love that movie. |
| Paradoxismminant chapter 1 . 12/9/2010 Yes XD. They totally needed a car chase... After all, what's a mafia thing without some car chases? |
| Haruna chapter 1 . 11/17/2009 I really got into this one. Hehe, wish it was a longer story. It's so good! |
| Dreaming Rain chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 Love it, very well-written. |
| cheesynoodle chapter 1 . 7/22/2009 Coincidentally, I'm listening to the Bourne trilogy soundtrack. :D which makes this even more fabulous. |
| the.dethroned.crown chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 wow; very nice! You handled the tention very well. Not many people can do a scene like that and keep you so invested and keep it detailed. Great job! That was really great! |
| Aunty Soshul chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 ah teenagers and their silliness. This was really great and if I wasn't living on two hours of sleep and lovely caffeine (how the hell am I even able to read this?) I'd leave you a long and detailed review praising you for the originality and amazing-ness and other other good things like how in character your characters are and what not and I totally wasn't expecting Gokudera to light it on fire and this is the best car chase/action sequence I have ever seen written. |
| Makayla chapter 1 . 5/9/2009 When did Yamamoto take complete control of the driving? If he's in the passanger seat he shouldn't be able to reach the pedals lol You could probably do with fixing that. Other than that- wow! Exciting and action-packed and you got Yamamoto's trhought porcesses down to a pat. I loved the bit about this still being a 'game' in his mind, even if people can die. |
| Courgette chapter 1 . 3/24/2009 This was brilliant! You've got an excellent writing style, and you've caught Yamamoto perfectly :) I really enjoyed reading this. |
| Synonym chapter 1 . 9/13/2008 This fic makes me want to hunt every Car-Chase Fic in existence. XD It's like James Bond, but instead of British smart-ass guy, you have mixed-raced BFF idiots. This fic is absolute love. |
| peachpinksugar chapter 1 . 9/2/2008 SO INTENSE! Now I'm all fired up XD |
