The Mappa Douji comic was so sad. I really like how you integrated it into your story. I like how Yoh is trying to bond or at least understand. I know it isn't likely to work, but I like how you implemented it into your story. It was a very enjoyable read. Thanks for writing this!

This was really interesting but there is one thing Yoh is wrong about; his dreams are hi memories just as much as they are Hao's

twinfeels... I would have loved twincest too but alas..

omg this is great! 10/10 I only wished u could continue

Oh, amazing. Very touching and really good.

Incredible. Very moving; loved the flow of the dialogue between past and present. A whirlwind of confusion and emotion with no real answers, but enough of the story scattered to patch together. A great read.

Wow, amazing finish, amazing story, amazing... everything!
You're missing a few commas here and there but aside from that your grammar's pretty good!

That was simply wonderful! Amazing story!

Now it simply came to me that Yoh actually doesn't know the real past of Hao, right?

This fic gives me a nice idea..

i don't know what to say. really good story, touching, sad, yet beautiful.

i wonder why i've never read anything like this before. Yoh having Hao's memories i mean. that's a truly good idea and it is so probable. being alone...is really really hard, people usually underestimate the pain solitude can bring. that was a good story. thank you

Aw! That was sad! And I just finished reading that manga too. T.T Poor Hao. Such a poor little kid. -hearts- Good work!

yees! This was just what I was looking for all this time *_*

yeah, i was looking for FFs on this topic. I like it very much _

In a sad sort of way, that was really cute. Good job.

I love this story, its beautiful.

I loved this, especially the flashbacks and how edgy they were! ]] If I had an account I'd favee