It may be because I was stupidly listening to Coldplay's Fix You, but I prefer to believe that it was your beautiful retelling of a gorgeous story! Thank you so much for sharing this 3

I recognize this from LiveJournal! I believe I commented on it there, as well, but, in case I didn't, I'd like to say that this is beuatiful, haunting, vivid, and devastating. I love the formatting as well. More, please!

Thank you for this wonderfully devastating piece of work. I've read so many stories where Achilles is a clear erastes in the relationship, so it was interesting to see a different viewpoint.

It's a really good version of their story. Me likes much.