Good end

Caspian is VERY oblivious.

LOVE IT!

Pff. Caspian is SO nosy. Luv ur story!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!
(Haters are dumb, and some people it seems, cannot read properly when it comes to warnings, for what I've seen in the reviews)
I'm honestly running out of Pedmund fics, so finding this one was quite the awesome surprise. Thanks so much for sharing it, and I hope that even if some people in this fandom have shown themselves to be quite idiotic, you'll know that there are people here that love this, and are really grateful to you for sharing this story.

(To Haters: FIGHT ME, JERKS, LEAVE THE AUTHOR ALONE!)

I did not like at all how you made Edmund and Peter gay. I also completely hated when Peter kissed Edmund and didn't like how Edmund was okay with it. The first 3 chapters were so good I didn't like the last 2 chapters nearly as well . I think it could of been much better and hope you finish the book with common sense!

I thought it was alittle weird that Peter kissed Edmund. I also didn't really enjoy Edmund crying that much but I did like the flashbacks. With alittle less kissing and crying is was a good chapter.

I thought this chapter was very emotional but still o liked it, the only thing I thought there could of been less of was all the characters crying (especially Edmund) but in all us has been a very interesting story so far and can't wait to finish it!

I think it was just a little too emotional with Peter and Edmund but I did definally enjoyed the back story. I think it was a pretty good chapter and I loved the general bonding between Peter and Edmund

I loved it! I especially liked how you showed Edmunds side of the story. I also liked how you described each scene

it was really good do you have a sequel for this story of just two/three shots please! thanks for writing this story..

If it was excellent I would be this far into it, let alone moving on to Part 6. As far as bi-polar goes, it can't be avoided, just the time warp alone, plus different cultures in the two domains, and, in particular, Peter as High King and "mere 'boy'" in England; plus these two became joined at the hip after the death of the White Witch.

So, put your worries away and get writing.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
There had better be a FREAKING SEQUEL with a CONCLUSIVE HAPPY ENDING hopefully. No pressure (10 thousand trillion tonnes of the stuff)
Beautiful love story, I love it develops and the scene in the end of the last chapter was just the most beautiful thing I've ever read, truly. I've read a lot of yaoi, but I've never seen it portrayed so lovingly before, it truly almost drove me to tears (good tears) and I just wish there was more. Thank you so much for writing this, it just may be one of the best fanfics I have ever read.

This is my FAVORITE Pedmund story on FF. And this chapter is my favorite of the story! The beauty of their love, the intensity of their passion, the intermingling of past incidents in their relationship with their lovemaking wow. I especially love this...

"Edmund, you're so beautiful...so perfect. You've seen the darkness and you pulled away from it...that's strength I'll never know. You love those that do not deserve your love, that is a love I will never own. You lower yourself to those that are lower than life, that is a humbleness I will never have. You stand your ground against the deadliest of foes, that is a courage I will never hold."

You are amazing! Keep up the good work!

Rather intruiged by your story! You kinda feel as if you shouldn't keep reading but you just can't help it! (Sorry didn't mean to offend you, I just find the whole slash thing a bit awkward but your story is just drawing me in, it's really quite sweet!) Apart from some teency grammatical errors it's very well written though :)

I must, however, strongly disagree with your comment about Skandar Keynes (Edmund), he is absolutely gorgeous, I can't get enough of him haha! I guess it's personal taste though but, if you don't mind, I'm going to continue to imagine Skandar rather than Rob Pattinson, I just can't see another Edmund than Skandar, sorry!