you really should update this! It's amazing!

so will U update this or actually not? :( This really IS a beatiful story and it can be seen.

the more reviews the faster the update huh? then i'm willing to contribute!

Thank you for sharing your work with us.

I'm waiting for your next update as I am sure most of us all are. :)

Thank you again for such a good work.

Keep it up! I love the updates, I really want to know what's going to happen with Haruka and Michiru.

Long chapter for long waiting reader, I never complain about it for sure :D Still you make such a good decision to not split into two chapters, otherwise they will be too boring of memories of the past. Can't wait too see how H&M will meet each other without their masks! Wish it's not too long for next update.

Great job! you have improved so much it's amazing. I can't wait to read the next part.

I absolutely love this story so far. Excellent writing and a wonderful beginning so far.

I'm hooked and can't wait for an update!

Aww, it was really beautiful...

Sorry, I don't have time to leave detailed review today but I want you to know that I loved this update!

The POVs of Haruka and Michiru don't feel any confusing because you managed to keep the personal style (of speech or thinking ;)) of each one of them :) Also you drew their personalities very well, and the dance... the scene of parting... ahh, it's so romantic and lovely...! I loved it!

Thank you for this installment, it's awesome!

Best wishes,

RubyNury

Wow thank you. I will take that as a compliment.

I enjoyed getting Michiru's perspective on events. And congratulations on your 2 month anniversary! That's great! _

As to an editor, I would offer but my grammar isn't the greatest when it comes to editing. I'd send you the link to my mom or my friend but they're both terrifying where grammar is concerned with how precise they are.

Another exquisite chapter. I love the dancing and the little bit of action at the end. Nice work. _

So I'm a little lost at some of the points, and I think there are you some things you need to work on. But overall a good story that I will continue to follow.

I really liked how you describe Haruka saw Michiru's nervousness as they stood on the balcony. I saw it in my head, and I think I want to draw it. I'll let you know if I do, thought the dress may not be what you'd like it to be. .~

Wonderfull job!

So detailed and picturesque discription of the dances and the scenes! And you chose a very nice way to show the thoughts of both Haruka and Michiru!

your story is really sweet to read. Please keep writing :)

Wish you the best,

RubyNury

Good chapter. Liked the dances. Loved how Ruka managed to save Michi again. Hope you get to feeling better and update soon.

Great chapter. Laughed at Ruka being mobbed by the girls and managing to be with them a short time then walk away. Liked how Michi and Ruka wer both looking for each other after they first saw each other. Loved how Ruka managed to get the guy to leave Michi alone. Liked how Michi got Ruka to stay near her longer. Liked how you discribed the dance. Great cliffy.