Really interesting idea and good too, I just like how you bring out Claude Frollo madness for Esmeralda really good and creepy but I lije that, Noe Esmeralda is in denial about Phoebus but had seen the truth about him the one thing is that somehow no one thinks of Quasimodo in the story's I have read so far they totally forgot about him and his devotion to her and Frollo they always leave him behind I hope you will show him again. I hope you will write further on it that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Please, please, please update! Cant get enough of this story 3

Again, I shal beg you to finish this story, for it is a wonderful story. Also, i know you write stories for Phantom, and i wonder, does anyone notice the similarities between Eric and Claude? At least, Eric is not as horrific as Claude.

Please, please, please! Finish the story, I really really love it, and I am dying to know what happens to them next.

I absolutely adore the story, for you right the characters characterizations so well. especially the characterization of Claude. Please, please, please continue the story, though I know it’s been a long time

why do not you continue?

Oh what a brilliant story! I'd really love to see more if you're still writing it (though I know it's been a long time since you updated). I'm so impressed by how well-paced the plot is, and how in-character the characters are. I actually prefer your Esmeralda to Hugo's Esmeralda :) And I'm really enjoying seeing Claude experience such a range of emotions (from adoration to irritation) while trying to win Esmeralda over. The story you've come up with offers the perfect opportunity to uncover layers to Claude that aren't apparent (or do not have the chance to become apparent) in Hugo's novel - and you uncover them masterfully. It's been a thoroughly enjoyable read and I'm longing to find out what happens next.

Wow. What a brilliant story! You're exploring the relationship between Claude and Esmeralda so thoroughly and convincingly. This chapter's scene between Claude and Quasimodo was fascinating and powerful. Somehow you manage to make each impasse between Esmeralda and Claude fresh and different, uncovering something new between them. Excellent work. I finished reading Notre Dame only a couple of days ago, and your story feels like a completely natural continuation of the prison cell scene. You've captured all the complexities and conflicting desires within Frollo beautifully.

I just saw that you planned on updating this in 2013 but never did. So sad! I was really hoping for a proper kiss between Frollo and Esme! Such a lovely story xxx

Oh my goodness, that was beautiful. I can't wait to read the rest.

Could you please continue the story!

Great story

This is excellent! Will you be writing any more?

plis, no more?

This isthe most interesting story i read so far in this fandom it is not just tacky but you make it seem believable without the priest being a total monster or the girl a total submissive wimp. Speaking of wimps I hope Jehan gets killed as well as the soldier. I hope quasimodo still comes into play at some point.