I read this because I've seen that episode of Family Guy and I must say: Bravo. Just Bravo.

Wow. I am eager to read more of your work now! This was an absolutley fantastic piece, and just. Wow.

Amazing.

I've read this fic several times, and it remains one of my favorites in the A:TLA fandom. I think this is just really heartbreaking and sad, but you did it so well. Keep up the great work!

Wow, that was beautiful! Besides some of the dialog being confusing, it was really well written. I especially love the repeated use of the tongue twisters :D You gave such depth to Mai's character, and even showed us a different side of Zuko XD

Excellent job!

poor mai...she...died?

This was amazing I mean just perfect such meaning such power in just a few words. Excellent work

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! This fic was pure awesomeness. Everything you wrote was just...wonderful. This is one of my favorite Avatar fics, and you just did a great job with it. Awesome work!

Souke. That was amazing.

Blossom-kun

Beautiful! Brilliant! I love the economy of words, how much you say with so little. The progression of Mai's character from alienated to lonely to jealous is perfectly smoothed over by the indifferent tone that paints narrative. Terrific!

You rock my bottom socks, yes you do! You. Are. Made. Off. AWESOME-NESS!

So good my awesome friend! XD

Wow, very strong and powerful... and incredible oneshot. Awesome, awesome work. Beautifully written.

That was beautifully written! A little sad for Mai... but i support Zutara! xD

wow, that was amazing.

i'm a zutarian, but i feel deeply sorry for Mai.

you're an awesome writer! loved every bit of it.

kalyn19

wow... that was deeply moving. you really show the character dept of Mai which many people dont get. They usually just show her as screaming at zuko if its a zutara story and then leaving. I love how you told it in her point of view and showed how she can have multiple sides to her.

Overall, excellent job!