""i didn't smell you" but that would have just sounded creepy" is comedy gold
i died reading that

Beautifully written; exciting, original take on Twilight. It is one of my favorites.

This was a great take on the Twilight universe. I'm surprised that there's not more favs/reviews. Thanks for writing. :-)

It's so difficult to find a good story like this. Good is an understatement.. brilliant! Thanks.

so good xc

I don’t know you did that to Rose.

rob and kris are supposed to be Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart right?

This was such a different take on the story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing!

I don't remember who recommended this story, but I am glad I put it down on my to read list. It is such an unusual take of Twilight and I enjoyed it tremendously. Great story!

that was so beautiful! ah thank you so much for sucj a great story! definitely one of my top ten! i'm so glad it was a HEA for everyone!

oh goodness I'm just so happy that Jasper is okay and not dead ahh yes I can't wait to see how this story resolves! The pacing is just absolutely perfect!

Is Jasper gone!? No no no no NO! I want Alice to have a happy ending! aaaaaaahhh 10 chapters left

Your story is so great, just so great! I can't wait to continue reading it. BTW I'm so glad Rose isn't an evil bitch! She's just a normal character and I'm so happy her and Bella are friends. Ahh 12 more chapters to go!

Kris and Rob huh? Kris short for Kristen?

I'm so glad I found this sweet - but mysterious story!