Great story, characters, and writing. This is my new favorite.

Very well written, very enjoyable to read. I love how you captured both their emotions as well as their personalities. Great job!

This was a beautiful story. :) I usually like Gaara as the seme but the way you described him liking the bottom better really made sense and was so adorable!

Loved it..!

This was great..! It was so deep, and the writing was brillient..!

Great job, keep up the great work Im adding this to my favorites..!

what a beautiful story! i love it! thank you for this great piece of writing XD

D: Aw.

The end was super cute. Rot my teeth with your sweetness, why don't you. _o

The beginning got me a bit. There was a bit of Gaara being needy and Naruto being a monster beneath the sheets and I did enjoy.

Well written overall, and the dialogue between the two was simply adorable. [:

AWESOME!

I LOVE IT!

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It's beautiful, and well-written, well-personified, very authentic as to how they would act in such a situation, and all in all a work of art D

That was probably the sweetest and most adorable smut I've ever read. Awesome job. ]

uhg, can i ever write a sweet, meaningful, yet sexy lemon someday as you do? i've tried in RPs and less detailed in one of my fanfics, but i need more practice, i think. because in this little oneshot of yours, it was like seeing the two in a new yet familiar light, and it was breathtaking. *bows* i am clearly outmatched, but it's a good feeling. :3

hmm, part of their positions int he lemon half of this reminded me of one of Haluka Mugen's NaruGaa doujins. i have it saved in a hidden folder on my computer. *wink* ;)

anyhow, this is an instant fav, and i'm even goign to add it to my C2. thanks for posting this for NaruGaa day~! :D

This is the second time I read this story.

Still as amazing as the first time.

You are an awesome writer.

the begining sort of surprised me but the rest was so sweet i just...i just couldnt take all that love in at once*sniffles* so i wemt and got a cookie then came back absolutly adored how all your spelling was correct

THANK GOD! Fianlly, a good fic! Especially lately, it's been every one and their grandmother taking a crack at writing a lemon. I've gotten so far as to prase anything that isn't utter crack. this, however, is honestly a good fic, the likes of which I havn't seen in AGES! My hat is off, my lady, for you are a shimmering becon in the darkness of terrible fan fiction.

And I lvoe you for actually USING discriptions XD!

That was so wonderfully written. You did a really great job on this. Keep up the good work.

Alright, this is was really good.

-grins-

See Gaara your not alone.

Yay! More stories!

This was perfect - "soft" is exactly the right word for a loving expression. (this from a person who tears her hair out trying to find synonyms for "soft" so that she doesn't repeat the same word 20 times in a chapter). I liked this - the energy in the lovemaking, the uncertainty in Gaara, the smirk, the competition between the two, Naruto's chant (“My Gaara-chan is so cute! And he’s sweet and sexy to boot!” - he would SO say that!). Short but sweet, with everything that was needed to say, said. _