Reviews for Protectress
Guest chapter 13 . 7/13
Too short and all story was too fast but I liked it

Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
Edward's spouse chapter 13 . 6/3/2011
excellent story.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/13/2011
Beautifuly written. Brava.
Godschildtweety chapter 12 . 10/26/2010
Great story
BelladonnaBlues chapter 12 . 10/16/2010
What about carlisle and esme you told us about emmett and rosalie and alice and jasper and bella and edward but you forgot esme and carlisle just though i would ask
7HockeyStarVampireObsessed7 chapter 13 . 10/7/2010
Aww sweet story. :)
live.and.breath.books chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
:)

~Ari
Xiera A. Titain chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Artremis can't have a daughter she is one of the three maiden goddesses! . and greek mythology can be put together well, but not if you don't ave the simple facts of greek mythology!
shobsnet02 chapter 12 . 4/15/2010
Really, really great story. I was hoping for a sequel but since there's none I guess I just need to satisfy myself with your decision. You could do a better job at your grammar. Do you have a beta reader? It helps. :D
emmykat113 chapter 12 . 2/9/2010
You should write a sequel!
Kenai52503 chapter 12 . 3/14/2009
AW! I LOVE THAT STORY! :D
No1Longer1using1account chapter 5 . 3/1/2009
love it ! )
xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
awsome
Aphrodite Callipyge chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Young lady, you have just insulted Greek mythology. Had you only made Bella a nymph, or some lesser goddess, I still would have been extremely angry with you; but this...this is blasphemy. And for this, you shall not be forgiven.

I will not comment on further negative points, for this fandom often speaks for the quality of the writing. Call this a flame or whatever you want, but this is Twilight, after all, and deserves no more than flames.
BlueAngel69 chapter 12 . 12/7/2008
aw i absolutely love this story your brilliant

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