I feel like this might be made by a feminist with how they were like you men can only see talent in your gender. Like no, Naruto and Neji are just better lmao.

I loved your story to the core. At first eventhough they wasnt much of action I still like it the way the story went cause when I saw naruto I thought this(your story) is what his life should have been. And also I was so surprised that you made my heart jump with the invasion scenes. I really loved this story. Thank you so much for your hard work.

To be blunt one this story isn’t as good your other ones can see this a older story. Dialogue feels forced and theirs no emotion to the characters when they are talking. Genma was apart of Minatos guard and Kurenai along with Yuagao were apart of Kakashi age group. I don’t why you wrote them younger maybe for the sake of pairing with naruto but it just doesn’t make sense nor did you provide an explanation. Not to mention you didn’t mention the nine tails which I assume is still sealed within Kushina.

The only ever reaction you'd feel after killing someone wicked is nauseas because of the gore, but they're in a fight having adrenaline would disregard the surrounding and focus on the opposing. So he'd feel it in the aftermath. If he fucking stops in the middle of the fight because he's a pussy for killing someone, why the fuck is he so calm on doing his fucking ninjutsu that would kill people. He even fucking injured neji as a kid, then he became a pussy with this? This could probably be the reaction of hinata, but naruto?

Why the fuck would you feel guilty when it's in your moral and ethical code that you'd fucking kill after becoming a ninja. This isn't even someone who he fucking knows, this is people who wants his blood. Guilt only happens when it's in your subconscious mind that you shouldn't do it, but you need to. Like naruto if ever he'd need to kill sasuke without talk no jutsu, "canon naruto, mind you", not this fucking ass guilt trip who doesn't even make sense.

All the members of rookie nine are same age. Naruto failed the exam thrice only because he took it in advance

why do they always have to yell the jutsu? makes no sense to me.

Hi there

I really enjoyed the story, and I hope you make more stories with happy ending to them!

Keep up the great writing!

I don't think Iruka is that old tho

too much grammar mistakes

I think you were right in closing this story.
Even though very good all things must come to an end. (I truly enjoyed the ending of this story).
Looking forward to reading more of your fan fiction.
Job well done.

Why the fck Genma is a genin here? Genma already belongs to the Yondaime's personal guard in this timeframe.

I know this is old but the character dialogues feels so robotic, unnatural and forced.

Loves this story just reread it for the thirtieth time (I think, lost count really) thanks for introducing me to this wide world of fanfiction now I can't escape

Kushina has red hair not brown I just thought I'd point that out unless I was a typo happened sometimes I I just thought I'd let you know just in case but I do like the story so far thank you by the way kushina is the jinchuuriki for the nine tail fox Ninetales attack Village randomly it was pulled out of here by Obito Uchiha posing as Madara Uchiha and placed under a genjutsu I just thought that helped expand I know you might an alternate universe Terry but I'm just thought expand upon your story you ever thought about going back and correcting errors in it but the story has amazing potential so thank you I'm like most FanFiction on here at least you attempting to try and taking pride in your work that's the key to any good stories true fanfiction and fan of the story takes pride in the story and characters the right so keep up the good job and thank you have a great week