Huh... wonder how you found out about the slut girl manga

Yeah, like another reviewer said, Naruto may not be the kind to kiss and tell, but he’s not the one telling the story, is he?

›› Uzumaki Naruto isn't the type to kiss and tell.
But Naruto wasn't the one telling this tale to begin with. Now come back to FFN and spill... ;)

So, I read the story, and unable to resist, looked up who Bizen Sayoko was from...guess i'm a pervert, 'cuz I already read Slut Girl a long time ago (really enjoyable read by the way). Currently thinking about changing my name to perverteddude13...another great story by the way, keep up the good work.

it's good and all. but I wanted to be a little more, i don't know lemon-y...

*shiteatinggrin*

My guess: Sayoko was a champion of board games in her home town. She took Naruto to her house and they played the most intense game of monopoly the world has ever seen.

Ok this is fantastic. I absolutly love everything about this fic.

Brilliant, I couldn't stop laughing! Your writting is impeccable too, I really like the style :)
I loved how Naruto got a "kind-of-more-meaningful" way of losing his virginity, totally like him. I honestly can't picture him going all naughty with two stlutty strangers (not considering his age and inexperience in this fic).
Also, I really liked your explanation of Sandaime's decisions and Jiraiya's absence during Naruto's childhood. It made perfect sense, I enjoyed it very much.

I could see Naruto getting a girl on his own charm and not being the kiss and tell type.

Thanks for the read.

Great stuff.

i love sex

who would be the type to kiss and tell?... I FUCK AND BRAG!

I actually do know who she is, but only because I read Sl*t Girl years ago (and I enjoy the author's current martial arts manga, Aiki).

That said, it kind of ends on a downer note if you take into account all of the crap Jiraiya mentions about enemies doing anything to get their hands on the Namikaze bloodline, and then factor in both Sayoko being a "former" Grass Chunin, and her personality (if you ever read the manga) and imagine just how much more willing she would be to exploit others if she had been raised as a kunoichi.

If this weren't a comedy piece, we'd have an epilogue where the Hidden Grass Village get's their own Namikaze clan (that and/or Naruto dying or going sterile from some poison she slipped into him as they had sex), so it's kind of hard to enjoy it in light of that!

Why must you be such a funny writer?

You writing in cunning and witty, dry and droll. You draw me in with concepts then make me laugh. I commend you for your work.