Reviews for After the Outing
Robin Lee chapter 7 . 7/3/2019
Heeeeey. I know we're old and boring and probably in our 30s by now, but.

For the love of God, please explain the mind-f*ckery? Please. You don't even have to finish the story. Just drop me a PM with your cliff notes.

Even with a boring adult job, piles of bills to pay, a slew of personal tragedies, and the freedom to walk around in my home in naught but underwear, I'm still dying for some closure.

Or is there a better chance of Jesus coming back, first?
Preacherman1888 chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
Careful of the small grammatical errors. Other than that, it sounds promising.
Robin Lee chapter 13 . 9/1/2007
I just reread this, and it made me cry again. It's that good. Please finish it. ;_;
Iggy K chapter 13 . 5/9/2006
I was never expecting to add an M-rated story to my favourites. Upon realizing that this story was only rated for horror and coarse language, I knew I loved this story. Now I need to reread this story, it's so great. All your readers are waiting for you to update, too. {P} Are you going to update soon?
MGSThe End chapter 13 . 12/30/2004
2 words.

Literary Masterpiece.

I hope you continue, this is really good.
I'm finally happy chapter 13 . 6/22/2004
Yay! Thank you SO much for writing more. I can finally rest knowing who the killer is. -
Zarla chapter 13 . 5/19/2004
Man, I was wondering if you'd ever update this again. Bwaha. I still love this fic so. I did not see that twist coming, I must say. I'll hafta go back and reread everything and see how it all fits tagether.
Ya know, I dunno if I ever sent or mentioned these pics before, but I doodled two pics based off this fic of yers...
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Robin Lee now Luigisista chapter 13 . 4/13/2004
YOU UPDATED! 8D Oh, these tears of joy...
...
*is speechless*
...Gosh, what is there to say? Didn't see that coming. There is no emoticon for what I am feeling. Glad to know you are alive and that you are going to finish this. And don't you dare call this crap! It's one of the best written stuff in the Mario section...and there isn't much. You have such talent, Pisces. Don't let go of it!
also extremely frustrated chapter 12 . 2/19/2004
please update. 8( even if you're "too old" for writing fanfics. i just...i need to know who the killer is before i die, that's ALL i ask! you can't start something this good and suspenseful and not finish. there should be laws against that.
please finish?
extremely frustrated chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Why won't you update?
ARG! And I'm too stupid to figure out who the killer is!
If I can't figure it out, I'll go insane!
PLEASE UPDATE! It's really good and I wanna know what happens next
Robin Lee chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
...I hope she reads this...

It's been a year...

Luigi: I've been lying in a hospital bed with a tortured soul for 14 freakin' months? O_o

Aw, it's all right, Weege. *pat pat* I'm sure she'll update soon...

...Right?
Mitsukai William chapter 1 . 11/4/2002
! UPDATE DAMNIT! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR 5 MONTHS AND YOU STILL HAVEN'T UPDATED! UPDATE!
Zarla chapter 12 . 10/28/2002
Yay! I found it again! I loved this fic when I read it originally on yer site (I think) but it didn't have this many chapters and chapter 5 didn't work, but now I have da whole experience.

Eeeee I love this fic. It's so detailed and emotional and such an interesting take on the Mushroom Kingdom, it's just so terribly coooooool. I can't wait fer more.
Pennywise chapter 12 . 10/28/2002
I think I know who it is, but I wo'nt give it away.

But I have a question: Where's Wario? He seems to be the only overall-wearing Italian missing. Although I can see the problem of fitting him in such a serious fic...
Nanda chapter 12 . 10/18/2002
So... you... gonna finish, or what?
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