This is great. Good imagery.

A very nice and smooth narritive. Great work here.

wow as always fantastic! love your michael and lincoln stories!

I like your story of Michael's succession and the last three paraghaph.

He break himself free too while he break Lincoln free.

Love it. Thanks.

Excellent, once again you've gotten inside the character's heads. I loved how there were two different Michaels, one that followed the rules, and one that would break them to do the ultimate good. Will you ever run out of steam? I don't think so.