Ok I fed up reading until 13 chapters..I made it to read till the end with full of heavy heart.. I really telling you that I hate this story.. A complete disaster.. Ur story lacking balance between yuuri and wolfram who were the actual roles..but u made it one sided completely..showing yuuri as a coward..what did he do? Because of u authors the fans of kkm becoming one sided with wolram or yuuri..there is no balance between two characters..and making wolfram or yuuri hero and other as a dull and villain type..shit with this story..
Am not understanding one thing..wolfram can love before yuuri comes to the shinmakoku..and he can love in front of yuuri to any girl or boy..and kissed to any one..but if yuuri talk politely to any girl or receiving any love letters from anyone ..he didn't interest in her also get blamed by the wolfram and all.. And here wolfram always imagining bad things about cheating on him..
And that bitch trava really hell..by watching Wolframs memories..she knew that he was accusing even yuuri didn't cheat on wolfram still she also put the grudge against him.. I really hate this..for god sake he is still a kid.. He does have some feelings..and he wasn't ready for that..and he afariad by earth that gay thing is wrong and bullied by all.. Can't they understand this little bit? Really hell..
Here in this story wolfram ..murata yozak everybody flirt with wolfram and even to others but if yuuri talk official matter with anybody then everyone accused him..even that shit guards ..the low life bastards..how dare they accuse yuuri even if that mistake of Wolframs possession by trava was not his mistake..
Here I hate murata..bitch trava respect sage but not yuuri..murata a big flirt ..go here n there do that n this..but everyone happy with him..n he has chance to choose anyone until he find his true love..even trava told him at the end..but for yuuri he didn't have any chance..at 15 Age he mistakenly engaged to wolfram..and forced..and never had chance to look for love ..yes he fallen in love with wolfram but he didn't get the chance to feel it if that was true love or not..even wolfram loved once to a girl..he had a chance and he old enough to understand ..but he never tried to understand yuuri..and yuuri is a kid..that simple logic he missed..worrest fellow.. Yuuri has a pure soul.. He loves wolfram but due to his age and afriad about earth bullies..he never admitted..but u screiwed him and make other fans of kkm hate yuuri to their core..hell
U write stories well but not this.. Very dissoppointed..

Thank you for writing this story I feel so much joy reading this till the end

Oh my god! I really miss your way of writing ...

I loved it, thank you for writing )

i cant read ne more of this story u made yuri out to be the BIGGEST PUSSY EVERRR i cant stand to read how trouble whore around yuris friends how they accept it n how yuri doesnt use his higher position to make it stop or atleast kick some Ass im done with this story smh didnt even half this stupid chapter i mean wht kinda friends do wht they did to trouble knowing tht yuri actually loves wolfram...shit story

I love this fic sooo much! Thank you. THAT WAS THE MOST PERFECT ENDING EVER!
and the merged Yuuri was just perfection..

Such a wonderful story. At first I really don't like the fact that Trouble used wolfram's body like a puppet and make out with random people like that. Then when I learned about Yuuri's affair on earth, I just wanna skin him alive, even when he broke off with that girl, I still think that he's an ass. Wolfram deserves better, even it's a happy ending I still have a grudge against that sorry excuse of a maou then again I still spent 2 whole days reading this awesome story. With all the sleepless nights, a pair of blurry eyes and all the nagging from my parents, it was worth it. XD

I love how Conrad and Yozak can talk just by looking at each other ;D

Wolfram I hope he gets something to make him happy soon It's making me guilty for some reason to see him sad :(

Still loving the story though :)

Whaa. I felt so sad when Trouble/Tra'va left, thought I have to say. Since she has her own body now, I'd figured she'd fight to stay with Wolfram a little longer after all she does 'love' him right? I didn't really like her at first, but she grow on me lol Anyway once again. Loved the story. I'm half way through the Wedding one hehe

hihihi, cute i love the end. i am juste sorry this have no litle extra wit the wending night xd full of lemon detail (/ blush )

Poor Yozak. I feel bad for him that he had to be the one to walk in on Yuuri and Wolfram. I rather like Yozak and Wolfram "manly" bonding. It's also sad that Yozak's nice night with Conart was ruined because of it. The ten of spades that he flipped over at the end was very symbolic.

I love protective, big brother Gwendal.

hahaha the dust bunnies attacking Morgif was so cute.

This chapter left me teary eyed. I love it when the moah calls Wolframm endearing names. I felt bad for the Moah. He so rarely takes over Yuuri's form and when he does, it's almost a goodbye from Wolfram.

Yozak dreaming of Conart was a nice touch. Also I loved the scene with Yozak and Ta'va making out in the alley. The note at the end was very funny.

I always love your fics. I really liked the scene with Gwendal and Wolfram. I liked how Gwendal was able to keep Lady Celi from mothering Wolfram by making thier conversation a "man's" talk. The development between Murata and Ta'va is interesting. I'm not sure if I like it or not. It almost feels like a betrayal to Wolfram.

gah i know its the nth time i read this story already but i really couldnt help but feeling annoyed with conrad, how annoying to hear he keep calling yuuri's name first instead of his little brother.. {_}