nanny has a point, highly unlikely you would harm allura.

yes! write more

Are you going to write RTF2

Finally go through reading this fic. You have seriously got to post the sequel!

I should of review at the end a long time ago but better later then never. “The Price of Freedom” is my absolute favorite fanfiction Voltron story. I was reading that you are planning on writing a sequel to this story “Return to Doom”, I can’t wait. I know Allura has a problem with being on Doom because all she has is Lotor and Lotor can’t always be with Allura. I was thinking Allura needs a sanctuary, what if Lotor built an indoor garden, with would need alterative sunlight, for Allura connected to their rooms.

Okay, Allura is starting to piss me off now. She's rediculously whiny and unreasonable. Assualting royalty? Spying? Those get you killed. Period.

I'm glad to know that Allura still loves Lotor. Hopefully she finds him soon and tells him.

Sorry I didn't respond before I had to work. I now work at Dollar General in London Ohio. By the way great chapter update soon.

Damn update soon! Anyway I haven't been reading lately because I just found a job. WE! Anyway see you next chapter!

Fantastic story so far. The Price of Freedom is my favorite Voltron story, although Lusting Effects is right up there. My most preferred Voltron stories are the ones with Lotor and Allura together. I just wish Allura would give Lotor a break and see all that he does for her. Lotor is right when he says Allura sees everything as black and white, but the universe is not black and white it's grey. Allura needs to open her mind and see people as good and evil. In my opinion Allura loves Lotor, but hates the prince of Doom, pity that they are the same person. It's necessary for Allura to except Lotor for all he is, good and bad, for them to be happy.

hm...yeah, We hate Keith with a passion. eough said tere. So um...yeah, So do think it's an idea to have Allura get kiddnapped? Or did you think of something better. keep it up my friend.

Jesus Christ man, what the hell is Arus coming to? I hope at least no one has to get killed over this but then again its your work. That's what makes it fun, you never know what'll happen. See you next chapter.

yes, yes. I se I see. hm...Well, as far as the re-writing goes, you just do what you feel is necessary. The angry make-up sex, no, that will never do. Cuz in my opinion, a) Tha's not real sex, that's just we have nuthin better to do. b) Allura would NEVER under any circumstances agree to angry make up sex. and c)...I don't really have a c but I guess put your reason here. *shrugs* As far as the stuck plot thing, let Allura get kidnapped! O.O That would make everything super exciting. And you have Lotor find her and utterly destroy the person who did it.(or not that's up to you of course XD)but make it exciting maybe drag it out for three or four chapters to build suspense. *nod nod* But hey, that's just what I think, if you like the idea then totally use it, I don't care. but if you come up with something better use know whatever floats your boat.

Aw, man, I read all the other chapters on your website. man oh man. I knew Allura was dense but geez. -_-' Um...I haven't read anything except the second part of Lusting Effects and the later chapters of this story. so...yeah, I'll have to read some of your other stuff. Yeah, getting things ready for chapter 45 indeed. man oh man. -_-' I despies Keith with a passions hotter than 10,0 suns. I honestly hope beyond hope than when Keith dies he is sent to the core of the sun to riot away. I mean come on how low can a man possibly get. _ Her Allura is happy and thriving with her beloved husband Lotor(if you overlook the party that is _') and then his stupud $$ has to show back up and ruin EVERYTHING! *screams of pure and utter hatred*

*clears throat* Excuse me that was highly inappropriate.' But your welcome buddy. I know that when do this sort of thing I want positive feedback so I do the same for the I review. Well, I'd better cut this short of I'll run out of words. oh, and I'll leave a review on the second part of Lusting Effect and I think I'll read another one of your stories. Fear not I'll leave my name(fanfic username) so that you know it's me! _ Keep up the great work my friend.

Yay! So all is semi-well in the Castle of Lions. Well, I guess that's good news. By the way I found your site with all the other fanfics. *claps hands and cheers* um...ok, I'll try that. I'll just have to figure it out. Just one of those things I was gonna do eventually anyways. Well, do give up hope my friend. Just sorta work through it. I found that taking a break from something then coming back later always helps with the trouble spots. but hey, no rush here man, just go at your own pace and I'l be faithful to review._