this work is simply amazingly fantabulous

this is my favourite pepperony os .

This was great. Fantastically written. I loved all of this.

That was awesome,it was so well written too. It flowed very well.

What an awesome piece of writing! Now I have to go and seek more of this on your profile.

This was perfect! Loved it!

Awhh ! Just, awhh !

Absolutely perfect

This fic really made my night. Great work! :D

This is lovely prose, easing a natural progression of events to round out a satisfying ending. You are an excellent writer.

Ah, wonderful.

Wow, loved that hospital scene. Cant go wrong with angst, fluff and UST. Wonderful job ! (Sorry, I suck at reviewing)

That was a really good oneshot! And my favorite line was definately, "Pepper really doesn’t want to be known as the secretary-chick-of-the-guy-who-killed-the-world." rofl XD

What a lovely ending to a lovely fanfiction :) You've captured the awkward denial and uncertainty of Tony and Pepper's relationship so well, it's almost scary. Funny and heartwarming all at once. Thanks for sharing it with us!

~ Verona

'emanated by flickering blue light that gives it away. This should probably be 'illuminated' i.e. Lit up; not emanated. 'Emanated' means 'to come from'.

but aside from that a good story :) Especially this line

'...but then it’s gone and he’s gone too, and all she is left with is a memory and the taste of metallic copper in her mouth.'

Wonderful.

Great job with this. I loved how in the beginning it was more about what Tony wanted from Pepper but what he was willing to live with to have her in his life. Then when you turned it around and it was Pepper knowing what she wanted and what she could live with, that was awesome. You even kept the humor that is Tony alive in this piece that was so full of angst. I really, really enjoyed reading this.