Meh, after the line-break thingie things kinda went down-hill. I think if you rewrote that part, it'd be better. :D

~Kunai-sama.

it was so good! i read it like 3 times and still coluldnt stop

a tear actually came out of my eye at the end

bjhsgfj this was awesome. As someone who's roleplayed a female Matt for over a year now finding a fanfic like this made me very happy, especially since she's so similar to mine, right down to the pretending to be a man thing.

Love your writing, and oh God the ending was so sad! Poor Mello, Matt and their unborn baby D:

Definately adding this to my favourites.

i really liked this too bad they died that would of been one hot kid lol

I damn near cried at the end of this. Congratualtions. ;) At leas thtey can be together again, right?

I am wondering if one can detect the presence of a baby after only a few weeks, but still, this was great.

Once again, great job.

i love this story oh my god its was beautiful now im crying poor matt and mello your a really good author

Wow! This was great! Very nicely written and so cute lol

Wow that was really good, I liked the idea of makeing Matt a girl and haveing her be expecting at the end it was so tragic... I really liked it!