Esxcellent twist! Love it! D

excellent~! Here I'm thinking Sam is dark, but I did have a sneaking suspicion something was not normal for Dean. So this was really a day in the life of Dean in Hell story! Great job!

Brilliant! I so thought I was going to have to get upset because of an abrupt ending, but this was perfect! Such a great ending! I love the twist. In fact, I almost wish this had been the season's opener (and the actually opener could have been episode two!) Love it.

Oh I can't wait to see what happens when the brothers meet! Poor Dean... hates it when people think he's dumb... this story is fascinating!

I'm really liking this story so far. You have a great imagination, and know how to tell a good tale. Dean was Sam's pet? Oh Sammy, what's up with that? I can't wait to see what happens!

hiyas! this was really well written!

well done! LOL :)

Very very good! I truly did not see that coming!

But now that you know - there were signs - the constant heat/burning under his skin.

You stayed true to canon as we know it. Great job!

A brilliantly written story but being a Dean fan I didn't like what happened to him. I like the Dean rescued from hell stories or Dean not going to hell at all stories, but keeping him down there was just mean. thanks for sharing this one.

Great chapter. Update soon. I wasn't expecting that twist, but I love it.

Wow! It all makes sense now! I kept thinking that Sam wouldn't have broken his promise - wouldn't have turned evil. And sure enough, he didn't, but it is Dean's personal hell that Sam would be lost, of course. Good job wrapping those threads together.

update soon! its a great story, very interesting!

Great chapter. Update soon. Dean's right. They need to go in there and fight. He's also right about Bobby. At least he helped Dean out though.

I really like the world that you are developing in this story. It really intrigues me, and that's saying something with all the post season 3 stories that are out there. I think that you have captured Dean perfectly, and the potential for this story is awesome! I have to say that I am a huge fan of redeemed Sam, so I am hoping in the future Dean turns Sam away from the Dark Side, but for right now I am quite content to be along for the ride. You're doing great, keep it up!

Great first chapter! Glad to see that Dean is still as cocky, brash and funny as ever. Don't know if I'm ready for an evil, demonic Sam, but I'll have to suck it up - I definitely want to know what happens next! Good writing, lots of tension.

- Wendy

Great story so far. I can't wait to see where this goes.