Why isn't this in the crossover section?

Dead?

Update update update update pleeeeeaaaaaassseeeee

where's chapter 4,5 and 6?this story hasn't been updated for years now.

Fate-san must join the tournament!i wanna see her in action against kaede!By the way,where's chapter 4 and 5?this story haven't been updated for a while update it.I wanna see the rest of the stories

I think added some battle story is good point why not added fate in the turnamen and good luck with your story

I love it! My two favorite anime/manga. XD Please put Nanoha in the tournament! I want to see her starlight breaker and the White Devil appear. Haha anways plz continue. I can't wait for the next update.

Fate should join! Join Fate-Chan! Good book by the way. It's pretty late, and I'm getting tierd but this book was to awsome to put down ;)

I really like it!

I remembered reading this fic ages ago and have been searching for it!

I love both Mahou Sensei Negima and Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha!

Nice plot, nice idea!

More! And fate should totally fight, whip em all

Let her join...! hahaha i want to see her in full form... and nanoha and hayate toooo... can you make this nanofate? im just suggesting but if you dont want it fine either way or make it konosetsu tooo... please update

Don't forget that Teana Lanster looks almost like Asuna Kagurazaka. So please try to make some twist, for instance, Negi mistakes Teana to be Asuna or his sister, Nekane.

Two things. First, an idea for a new mode for Teana's Cross Mirage: Longsword Mode. Instead of a curving dagger, Cross Mirage transforms into a sword hilt, from which extends a meter-long double-edged straight sword (DBZ Future-Trunks-style) of energy.

Second: WHY IS THE NEXT CHAPTER TAKING SO LONG?

Interesting idea.

Conserning Fate being in the tournament, don't do it. It'll just be too much trouble and complication since she can't use her device. However, Vita would be better choice to put in the tournament considering how her device actually works and the fact that's it's not bladed. Subaru would also be a good choice for the tournament for the same reason as Vita.

Pairings? Would it be too much to ask for KonoSetsu and NanoFate? I would completely understand if you're not into shojo-ai, in that case you can ignore my inner yuri fangirl.

I hope you continue this since it appears that you haven't updated in awhile.

Firstly - you need to 'lrn2 collective nouns'. Still you seem fairly young so i assume you'll learn and grow etc.

using the names from the dub is also frustrating but thats a personal thing.

think carefully about having fate join the tournament. no bladed weapons means that if she wants to use a device fate will have to borrow raging heart or the book of twilight in order to use magic in the tournament. actually since devices automatically incant spells whether the mage wants them to or not raging heart is out too. 'no incanted spells' after all. that leaves the book of twilight/darkness because it doesnt seem to have a voice, but can anyone other than hayate even wield that? basically i'd avoid letting her enter because whatever you do it just makes suspension of disbelief harder.

from the story so far your characterisation isnt good enough for the TSAB officers to take chaos side believably, everyone taking different sides even less so. really youre going to have to go with the 'good guys are good' plot.

lastly as a fan of both series i would like to ask you to review my upcoming X-over fic with the same critical eye. it should be up inside a week.

~ja ne