| Reviews for A Simple Dare |
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KitaraStrife chapter 5 . 4/27/2009 One word describes this chapter: Hawt! |
KitaraStrife chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 ""You are death to my shirts"" XD Poor Joey. Seto keeps tearing his shirts to shreds! GREAT CHAPTER! ;D |
KitaraStrife chapter 3 . 4/27/2009 ... Meh! Who cares if they're going too fast right now? I sure as all hell don't with a lemon scene like that! XD {gives ramen} |
KitaraStrife chapter 2 . 4/27/2009 Umm... moving a little fast here, don't you think? (O.o) I mean, Kaiba's scaring me with how fast you're making him move in on Joey, and... well... IT'S USUALLY A BAD THING WHEN KAIBA STARTS SCARING ME! Hell, it's usually a bad thing when ANY of my favorite anime characters start scaring me in a fanfic that has them pretty much staying in character! {spazzing out in her head} |
KitaraStrife chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 {roflao} OH GAWD! MY POOR STOMACH! XD Poor Joey! Tristan, you are SO gonna get hell for this later, I just KNOW IT! {can't stop laughing and just clicks the next chapter button} P.S. BTW, you spelled "aforementioned" wrong. It's all one word, not two separate ones. |
seto'swifey chapter 5 . 9/12/2008 Wow these two are like rabbits! Loving the setojoey love and cant wait to read more of it. |
XMeikoX chapter 5 . 9/3/2008 Its like a parade of lemons! I love it! Write more please! |
Forest Reader chapter 5 . 9/3/2008 oh my o.0 hawt meyn smexing! |
Gus Kinney The Prodigal Son chapter 2 . 8/7/2008 that is crazy man but updated it |
Tobyk947 chapter 2 . 8/7/2008 I can see Kaiba telling someone that they'll never do business in a town ever again, I can't see him punching people in the face (awesome and lol). Your story's awesome. And it's a fan-fic. I cant believe some people are just such little haters. Oh well. It's great, I love it. |
seto'swifey chapter 2 . 8/6/2008 Wow a lovesick Kaiba is the funniest thing ever. Love the story. |
mercyonmeplease chapter 1 . 8/4/2008 interesting plot but theres way too many plot holes and its sorta rocky and not smooth maybe you can try and get some free time in which you can write without rushing one scene that i think really needs to be changed is where joey just calmly wears a DRESS when he keeps on saying that hes straight...hope this helps |
XMeikoX chapter 2 . 8/3/2008 Poor Joey, so confused. And Kaiba is so cute at the end of this chapter - I can't wait for the next one! |
Forest Reader chapter 1 . 8/3/2008 tee hee hee I'm looking forward to this lol! |
XMeikoX chapter 1 . 8/1/2008 That was cute. Very well writen. I'm really curious about the begining though. Go around naked or wear a dress? |