I was wondering why Harry hadn't gotten his cloak. Where would Dumbles have put it if he thought Harry had died?

Whew! They made it!

Crossing fingers that you'll allow everyone to live...

Why in the world would Dumbles have told the Ministry the truth about Harry? It's a sieve. Another bad decision on his part.

Somehow I was hoping he'd have a wand made for him that didn't have the race. Ah well, hope spring eternal.

Wow, honestly I'm impressed that you manage to write three whole books for this fan fiction considering the amount of hate reviews you get, and honestly I have to agree with them, I think you have an interesting premise but the way you execute it is just terrible, dull and a bit boring

Three things - it is impossible to hold and block spells at the same time; Harry learnt to be observant of his surroundings since he was 12, so DEs sneaking up on him shouldn't be possible; why, oh why would Harry ever hand the prophecy over - in fact this Harry is even less naive than canon Harry...

But Harry is not afraid of people's opinion at all? Crumbling what down exactly? It's not like anybody is going to attack him or Sirius, the fear just feels out of place. There is nothing substantial that the ministry is holding over their heads for them to be afraid...

I don't understand why it's okay for girls hit boys and boys are not supposed to retaliate. What if Ginny had given her honest opinion, Harry didn't like it and slapped her? How is it fair actually?

I still don't see what solid reason the ministry has to interfere at Hogwarts. This Harry and Sirius hiding thing, what was the reason the ministry had to be made aware of anyway?

Shouldn't it be the other way around? Because the Ministry imprisoned an innocent man without a trial, wouldn't Sirius actually have leverage against them? What reason was there for Dumbledore to have to succumb to pressure here considering he isn't claiming Voldemort's return like in canon?

So why would Peter know of Grimauld but not Remus?

Good book, had plenty of ups and downs, I’ll need a break before starting the next one, but I’m nonetheless excited to see everything reach its conclusion

Stop rambling on in the middle of a high tension scenario! (Sorry, I shouldn’t be leaving so many derogatory reviews, but my god is this painful!)

“Watched helplessly”?! He’s got a bloody wand! Why not have him use it once in a while? I thought this story was meant to have Harry smart and at least vaguely prepared? So far he’s being outperformed by the original, which says a lot about the author! (Sorry, for that attack, I do normally find this a good fic, but my god, learn how to resolve the conflicts that you constantly create!)

I should finish reading before posting this, but I’m sorry, I’m too annoyed! Harry should just punch Umbridge in the nose and get on with it, this is no time for such a conflict, and it’s so obviously forced to match the original books, that it’s just painful. What don’t authors understand about the phrase Alternate Universe? You don’t need to match the plot points up!