In the past, the Doctor has broken the Fourth Wall quite a few times. The first time was in 1965.

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Best.
Last chapter.
Ever.

I Will DEFINITELY READ MORE OF YOUR ATORIES. Fantastic!

Okay, the first chapter was good, but the second won me, great job!

About breaking the Fourth Wall, as in talking directly to the audience, in the past the Doctor has done that. Quite a few times.

Best part was the fourth wall joke. That mader laugh hard.

Wow, what an surmounting endeavor you've undertaken with this crossover, and it certainly didn't disappoint. I favorited this piece awhile back, waiting for a time when I'd be able to tackle it all in one setting, and happily I did just that over the weekend.

As a fan of both Resident Evil and Doctor Who, especially the Doctor (10th) & Donna pairing, I think you've done a fantastic job of blending the two realms seamlessly. It was in turns tragic, horrific, humorous, and scientifically overhelming (in terms of the jargon). I have to admit there were many times when I hadn't a clue what on going on. The whol alphabet of virus's got a tad confusing to follow towards the end. But that's down to my lack of knowledge, certainly not your skill as a writer.

And speaking of skills, you've got those in abundance. The characterizations as a whole were spot-on. I easily recognized elements in both worlds (Who & Resident) so that I was able to empathize with their plights, emotions, and frustrations. You even made me feel for the bad guys at the right moments, while at the same time, cursing their single-minded goals of evil.

My only critique would be with Donna's characterization. I got upset at times with the way she was belitted and dismissed. At times it seemed that everyone took a personal shot at her, even the Doctor's comments at points were cruel and unfeeling. It seemed no matter what she did to help, and she did plently, including saving Claire, which resulted in her infection with the virus after being bitten. As well as sacrificing herself, in a sense, so that the Doctor and his team could continue with the antidote without being seen. Don't get me wrong, you made up for it in many places, where Donna was given the praise she so deserved, but all in all, it didn't make up for the way she treated along the way.

That being said, this story was a treat to read and I enjoyed every minute of it. It was exciting and adventurous, capturing the best bits of both worlds. Thanks again for writing this, and I hope to read more of your work. I only wish I had half the brain and creative flow that you do!

Usually I just favorite and run, but I had to say that this was amazing! I may have only seen the movies, but you had more than enough detail so that my lack of RE game experience didn't hinder my enjoyment.

I loved your command of technobabble, and you had the Doctor and Donna nailed perfectly. Loved it when she was smarting off at Wesker, even after he bit and infected her, which had me on the edge of my seat, especially after the Doctor came up with the D-virus. Loved the explanation of the origins of the T-virus too.

And Wesker's fate? SUCH poetic justice!

Kudos to you!

UNFREAKINGBELIEVABLE! :)

I forgot to mention one last thing that bothered me about the last chapter. There is a trope called "Inventional Wisdom" where someone builds a machine and adds a stupid feature to it like a self destruct switch or something. Like the "Blow" switch on the giant vacuum maid in Spaceballs. Why did Wesker make a bionic eye and then build a screen that seems to serve no other function but to accidentally lobotomize himself someday? Hay, to be fair this kind of stupidity happens in real life, like Hot Tubs have a temperature control that can reach boiling temperatures or a car with a speedometer that goes over a hundred even though the car can't go that fast or it's illegal to. But what did Wesker do it for?

rereading this chapter I find Myself a little annoyed by the Doctor's hubris. It's like in the third Harry Potter book when Hermione kept insisting that Crookshanks wasn't a danger to Scabbers when he obviously was, and then after all that build up for a moral where Hermione takes the fall for doing something stupid, Scabbers turns out to be a bad guy and Crookshanks' attacks become justified but Hermione's gall gets a Houdini coupon for karma. The gratitude for saving them he is annoyed with for not getting is justified because they were only in danger because of his no guns policy and his botched roasted chicken plan. And the idea that they instinctively go for only living prey makes sense too in the evolution of the virus to perpetuate itself. And the Zombie that Chris kills in the end is hardly deserving of a lecture because at best the zombie was still a serial killer, a cannibal, and a plague carrying Typhoid Mary. That said this is still one of my favorite stories on ff. It's not like people started hating Harry Potter books or the character Hermione so much that the books didn't sell anymore.

I'll be honest with you. When i first clicked on this story i wasn't expecting much. Crossovers are a troublesome beasts, and the majority of them are rushed, undeveloped and just plain bad.

This is the exact opposite.

The pacing, the development of the characters and the atmosphere, the characterisation (especially the Doctor) and the grammar are near-perfect. Your plot fits both franchises, with the whole D-Virus adding a great effect.

However, i do have a few nitpicks.

Sometimes you'd start a chapter without clearly explaining what happened between that chapter and the last. It sometimes left me confused, and while i got the gist of it, it may help to be a tad more descriptive and explanatory just to help those reading.

Also, while the characterisation was near spot-on, i did feel that Leon was a bit out of character. I find him as being a bit more heroic than you let him be, a person who does the right thing above all others. But you did say you were taking artistic license, so i guess it's to be expected.

One common spelling mistake i also noticed was "defiantly", which is actually spelt "definitely".

But like i said, those were only small chinks in a very interesting and solid crossover story, and it's well worth the favourite.

Lastly, i was interested to see the relationship between the Doctor and Rebecca. Perhaps if you ever made the Doctor return to that world, she could be a companion. I honestly thought the dialogue between the two was the most impressive out of the relationships between the characters, and it seemed natural as well.

Long story short: A very impressive crossover story. I look forward to reading Fun House.

Actually, I wasn't aware that you didn't like Wesker. I like the guy; I just take great pleasure when I destroy him in my writing.

Fantastic story through and through. It's both a great action story and a first class morality play worthy of the great masters of writing.

The fight scene with Leon was something truly special. Every single twitch and move was visible in my mind. And I really liked Wesker's end. It's the perfect thing for a Doctor Who story. Indeed, I just love how principles are so important to the doctor. That's part of what sets him apart.

Truth be told, I'm a little sad that this has ended, it's been such a romp. I'll be awaiting your other Dr. Who crossover. The other crossover ideas you presented were also very good.

Ta

MAster of the Boot

I'm not as smart as I thought I was. I didn't realize what the D in D-Virus stood for until Donna yelled it out. That is a hilarious name for a virus.

The showdown with the Doctor and Wesker was really awsome. It's fair to say that you've gotten the essence of both characters down pat. I really liked how the doctor talked about being the last. It's no fun at all.

I really liked how you brought in a Nemesis monster. That was a really great move on your part. I just love Nemesis. I can just imagine him saying in that creepy voice, "Doctor."

And now Leon is in a bit of trouble. How unfortunate for him to end this way. BUt that's what you get for working for the government. IT'll only end in tears.

You're really good at your writing.

Ta

Master of the Boot

I like this, things are coming to a head now. I can feel the clock winding down. I can feel it all coming to a head and to quote a certain Dr. Who Villain, I can hear the drums getting closer.

This is an amazing Drama.

Ta

Master of the Boot

The doctor doesn't know it but he's hurt Wesker. In a single stroke, he's thrown Wesker's work and plans to the wind. I imagine this must be how Hitler felt when the war reached a turning point against him.

This is a fantastic chapter. Regardless of your concerns, the science works out just fine for me. I'm sold to the idea. I rather like the origin of the T-Virus as based in the chaotic ages of the past and how it's just like humanity. By designing the T-Virus so, you're able to make it something truly worthy of being a part of the Dr. Who Universe . . . well, sort of. This is the RE Universe but you get my drift.

Donna is doing just great, hell of a temp on that one. I forgott to mention this earlier, but I really liked Leon's new arm.

Ta

Master of the Boot