Loved this very well written

This was SO GOOD. I haven't reviewed your other stuff yet (haven't seen a lot of your other stuff, am working through it now) and have to imagine the reason you don't have 8,000 reviews is because people haven't read it. You clearly know these characters so well, you should have been writing for the show. (Hell, maybe you *were* writing for the show.) I love the fact that you make it so clear that it wasn't one-sided, even in Season One. When you read a lot of the S1 comments, people discuss the fact that Lyla trampled all over Tim's heart, used him as a Jason surrogate, and then ran back to Jason. But it's as if I (and you) were watching a different show - she clearly exhibited feelings for Tim; and she was torn between the guys, as would any sixteen-year-old girl who was used to playing a role her entire life. You capture that so beautifully, so eloquently. I'm a huge fan of the Tim-Lyla dynamic, and it's certainly hard to be of a fan of these two when they're breaking Jason Street's heart - but when you capture so beautifully the difficulty of being a teenager (and being in love, and being confused, and being a friend), as you do here, it's easier to understand why I fell completely in love with them, even back when it was kind of hard to love them. (You also capture the beauty of their post-Jason relationship, by the way, in some of your other pieces. But I guess I should review those separately.) :)

you are SO good at this, it's ridiculous. I am just getting through all of your stories now, and they are all awesome. Great job; fantastic job, two years late.

I must have missed this story, somehow. Anyway it is good, I like that you change POV. You have some pretty amazing lines in your text and it would be intresting to read another chapter. But I suppose you've moved on ;-)

This story most def deserve more than 2 reviews; it is insightful and well written.

That was a pretty good insight.

I loved it.