very well written, hope the author will continue this story soon.
Further more, I have enjoyed this story so far and I have high hopes that this story will indeed turn out existent. great job, and keep it up :)

Is that it? I hope you make another chapter- This is really good.

Every detail is perfectly described. Something like that is a gift, and boy you have it. Love your TFA fics!

I love this-
Have you ever heard of Geminigirl83 on deviantART? She also writes good TFA fics as well. I could send you a link of her stories if you'd like

Wow! Please continue this! I adore the story line! Please please please look into this story again! :D

Awesome~!

Oh MAN this was great

you have good writing skills

Keep it up .~ hope there is more

I love this story so much!

Great story! The plot and dialouge flowed really smoothly and I loved the way it was written. Keep up the good work!

oh, please update this when you get a chance! this is one of my favorite stories on . nice work!

-juana

...I know this isn't about OP, but...I'm so dying to know what's in store for him...O_O

Updateupdate! Oh lady-love, you make me so happy XD You're an inspiration to my LxP-loving inner beast!

As always, I love Lockdown's abrasive charm! I really do love the in-depth (but still attractively casual) speculations about the differences between Prowl's old self and his new self, and how everything he's been put through... has left some very practical GAPS in his programming, like the pain-thing. And like, how Prowl's ninjabot training is peeking through the chinks in his wiped databanks. Ugh, I just love the detail, and the way Lockdown HANDLES Prowl so expertly without much effort.

Dirty old bastard with a hook for a hand my favorite sum-up of Lockdown EVAR. (And the 'or I'll airlock you' line made me snort soda XD 'Airlock' is now my pet verb!)

Even the Autobot scene down on earth is so complete! Bulkhead and Bumblebee's voices were spot-on, I could he-eear Bulkhead meekly mumbling all that. It's a tough dynamic to write, with both Prowl and Optimus gone, but I'm excited for whatever's next! (Plus, Ratchet's musings on humans are insta-win. The undercurrent of familiar solemnity is rock-awesome.)

Oh, and on my livejournal love-fest-it's on the TFA community, where you posted your freakingawesome HondaBlackbird/Japanese commercial bit of hilarity. Curse you LJ for being such a brat D: CURSE YOU. Keep writing, ladyMis!

I do think this fic is cool. I wish you'd continue it. Come on! Continue! Yeah! It's really cool!

AAHA. Yay, update! (Hope you got my adorey message on livejournal!)

Satisfying! Like I said, I adore your Lockdown. He's just... guh, he just BEAMS cantankerous charm. And Lugnut was an utter surprise: I'll rely on the classic 'whoodathunkit', but it was also enlightening. Lugnut truly is a single-code, outdated model... one would think he'd been around quite a while, but that doesn't mean he can't form intense devotion in relation to all the devastation he's seen. Power has probably grown to be his religion. Truly a cool glance!

Your description of the bar made me incredibly happy. Why? Um, just because of the florid imaginitiveness and the very in-canon thinking. Your writing is like opening one easter egg after another :D Awesome fight scene!

Aw, Prowl barely lasted a megacycle on Vris D: Lockdown, you conniving bastard. That's EXACTLY how he would handle it, too! XP Casual my aft. CASUAL MY AFT I SAY.

Whoa, that was a really smart/devious strategy from Lockdown. As always, a nicely flowing and good-paced chapter. Looking forward to your next update!