nice little thing to the ember island players

Your piece felt a little unfinished. I feel as though you had a good idea but just couldn't get it down.

This was written well. I can imagine it as EIP's full version. Looking forward to reading more from you, hopefully with happier Kataang in it.

this was a great interreptation of the Ember Island Players episode. I really like how you formed Aang's struggle and passion to express his love for Katara :)

that wasnt nice! y wasnt Katara mean?

That was GREAT.

Wow, I wish that should have happen in the episode. It was so realistic, I really, REALLY like it.

This was cute, and very sweet...and awesum! I really like it when writers do there own little addendums to the episodes, because many times, they turn out to be really awesome! And rest assured yours was definitely one of them!