Perfect.

... Epic win

(hands you a cookie)

you are Awesome, the story lien so well placed and all fit together... Bravo!

Lovely. This is one of the most beautifully written bits of slash fic I've read in any fandom. You capture the essense of the characters, but change them enough that it really feels like time has passed for them, that they've all grown up and matured somewhat. You got inside the characters' heads nicely and the flow of the storyline through the three chapters is just right - a good balance of explaining what has happened in the past in this timeline and what is going on in its present. Danny and Vlad's relationship feels believeable and extremely possible in this story. Thanks for writing it - I really enjoyed reading it!

Tie-dyed Trickster

This is one of the best Danny/Vlad fics I have ever read.

You perfectly captured the essence of the characters, and the relationship is so pure.

Fantastic job!

well. not quite the ending i was expecting. but satisfying none the less.

This is a beautiful story you have, here. The way you've had Danny-and Vlad-grow up is believeable and heart-wrenching. The ending was satisfying, but I still wish there was more! You have a lovely writing style, and I enjoyed this story immensely. Great, great job. :)

I've read both chapters. I thought they were pretty good. I look forward to chapter 3.

That was adorable. I loved the roses and the note. Please update when you get the chance. This story is amazing.

The first chapter was straight forward. I am curious if you are going to continue this story.

very interesting take on their relationship post-PP. i'm all for the chasing if it ends up like that one did.

I really enjoyed your story, the psychological glimpses into Vlad's psyche were a great addition (much better than any action) I like that you carried on themes from the show but made it your own. I especially enjoyed your musings on Danny's role in the world after Phantom Planet. I wish you would write a sequel, I really enjoyed the story and would enjoy to see it fully developed if not maybe a two shot. Maybe show some more interaction between the two before Vlad escapes (and Danny's reaction to that) possibly from Danny's point of view. I would love to see how you would develop Danny's character. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece and I hope you have a really awesome day.

This is really good. I'm surprised you haven't updated anything else yet; you've got such a lovely style.

I'm curious. Are you going to turn this into a three-chapter story, or make three separate related oneshots? oAo

-G.G.

...Um, good job on everything...(puke)Update please! :)

(faints) But seriously I liked it, I read slash alot, it just entirely growses me out. (not a flame) This is a compliment.

Just lettin you know, TP