| Reviews for Timeless |
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   Queen Quasar chapter 4 . 2/14/2014 You keep writing McGready. It should be McCreary. I love the story though! |
| michelle88222 chapter 20 . 1/21/2014 SEQUEL PLEASE! |
| wickedwitchofthewest33 chapter 21 . 11/19/2012 Just Found the story and I love it! |
| HRHPrincessTricia chapter 21 . 5/5/2011 I don't understand why Peter is so nasty to Emily all the time. Can't wait for the sequel! |
| LuckySock chapter 1 . 12/14/2010 Please post the sequel! |
| If You're a Bird I'm a Bird chapter 21 . 10/28/2010 do post the sequel, I've been waiting ages for it! I think you should put the sequel into a small story :) |
| Dancing Through The Afterlife chapter 20 . 7/29/2010 PLEASE WRITE MORE! THIS IS REALLY GOOD! Princess of Narnia 1192 |
| mrspendragon chapter 20 . 5/2/2010 Nice loved it cant wait to start on the sequel |
| Bad Wolf Baybe chapter 21 . 2/27/2010 my main goal of this review is to be the 200th lol umm i read this stroy a long time ago, so i don't rememeber much about it...but i know i liked it :) |
| jazzstfu chapter 9 . 12/5/2009 You should... Use spellcheck. There are bad grammar mistakes, misspelled words. It's making me not want to read your story. |
| jazzstfu chapter 7 . 12/5/2009 What? There are five of them. How could Mr. Beaver not notice that? Shouldn't it be 2 sons of Adam and 3 daughters of Eve? |
| PandaShadow chapter 5 . 7/30/2009 um... that was the same as chapter four... |
| z chapter 21 . 7/29/2009 please put the sequel up soon! |
| alliwant chapter 19 . 7/21/2009 NO! She can't die! She has to end up with Peter! I'm so sad now! this was a really great story and I loved how you incorporated Emily into it, but in the end it was her fate to die. Loved the few last lines, "I was dying for Narnia." So beautiful! I thought Peter was a complete jackass in this. He was so insensitive to the suicidal thing and even egging Emily on to it. I hated hom for the most part. And it annoys the heck out of me how he's concerned at some point and turns around and starts saying all the shit to Emily. RAWR! Peter needs a good butt kicking. Emily is going to come back to life right? Cause Peter and her got to be together! Lucy is going to use her magic potion thing and and and...yea...but then you have to explain about her destiny to die, so logically, she would have to remain dead. But, anywhos cant wait to read the sequel! |
| vdhd chapter 21 . 7/20/2009 very good story |
