It reminded me of 'Lolita'. I do not quite remeber the movie 'Schindler's List' to say more. But I loved it! Intense and tense words and lines. Got me reflecting on two-faced lives. haha appreciate it!

Omg! You write so good loved to read this!

Love it! It was so chilling! Keep going! I know I shouldn't but I adore this pairing!

So, dark... I like it. I really like this story. I like your writing style and how you protrayed Amon, it was really good. I hope to see another chapter of this story, just to see the aftermath. Keep writing!

Muito bom e forte!

Wow, it's amazing!
Great description of Amon's thoughts. I'm really impressed! :D

And sorry for my English, but I'm from Poland.

You've captured the inner struggle *cough*neurosis*cough* very well!

*favs*

Wow. I love this, mostly because it's abtsract, but not too ambiguous, and it sounds almost as if it comes straight from the heart. ]

Hell...

I love you for this.

This has always been one of my favorite stories, and, as creepy as it sounds, this and Anne Frank used to be my bed time stories.

And Naruto!

But, thank you for this...

I've always loved the Holocaust. WWII in general.

You did an amazing job.

This was him to a "T".

Thanks again.

I really enjoyed this. You portrayed Goeth very well. His inner struggle was captivating. There was one spelling mistake though. When he was walking down the stairs it should be 'creaked under his weight' instead of 'wait'.

Excellent otherwise!

Brat~

Beautiful. Truly one of the best pieces I've read on this site. I'll definitely look into your other works as well.

A great story. very good.

this is a tragic story that was extremely well written. i've always wondered about the man behind the mask, as it were, and i believe your insight of goethe is quite profound. what would their story had been like if they had met in a different time/place? you are gifted writer and i shall definitely read more of your work. great job.

Wow. Powerful insight into a hateful, yet strangely & grotesquely sympathetic character. I was always intrigued by Goeth's portrayal in the movie and wondered at the depth of character that was given to him by Hollywood. Also makes me wonder a bit at what 'might have been' for someone that could be so torn like him if Hilter and Nazi Germany hadn't stepped in. Anyways, enough philosophy. Thanks for posting...

This is a wonderful story. You've really captured something here.