| Reviews for Darkness Falls Upon Us |
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AlernateReality chapter 10 . 12/3/2019 wtf is with Daphne here? One second kissing Harry the next with Blaise? |
Damien NightFall chapter 11 . 9/19/2019 Are you fucking kidding me? Is harry seriously that damn or do you just enforce his idiocy to get the plot to the point you want It to? First tricked by a trick that could have been thought of by a 5 year old, then not fighting back against Tracey Davis, and then spilling his guts to her. It's like your trying to make a badass take-no-shit Harry Potter but keep second guessing yourself and making him a submissive spoiled brat. |
MidnightsRose chapter 29 . 2/4/2019 This was a fun read, I really hope you update like promised. Cant wait for more. |
Padhi chapter 24 . 12/31/2018 Pathetic chapter asshole how can fleur feel bad for longbottoms when he knows who harry is and want him to feel bad lol harry is dark and she knows it even practocised dark curse yet u show such pathetic chapter u asshole rot in hell u bitch |
Padhi chapter 12 . 12/31/2018 For someone who is powerful and Slytherin u expised potter like this Shane on u when he is powerful enoto defend that curse why would he talk to the snake Ur writing is pathetic u bastard wastes my time I hope u rott in hell |
Padhi chapter 10 . 12/31/2018 If harry is too young so is Blaine and daphne pathetic writing why will harry sacrifice daphne and want to be a 3rd wheel in their friendship and he should be selfish hate Ur writing |
Oghma Infinium chapter 29 . 11/5/2018 Nice chapter. P.S; the spell is Legilimens, not Legilems -Oghma Infinium |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2018 This Harry is written to be far, far too naive to have survived growing up in an Orphanage. |
Tangere peripher chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 Well it sure seems abandoned, which is sad because it has been a very enjoyable read |
Pushi19 chapter 29 . 5/7/2018 Please update it soon |
BrotatoChips chapter 29 . 4/9/2018 Not abandoned? Scoff. |
rojely chapter 29 . 12/17/2017 3years I say abandoned |
Guest chapter 29 . 11/26/2017 When are you going to contine it. |
Guest chapter 29 . 7/4/2017 I hope you will continue the story. It's really a good story with a strong story-line. |
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 6/16/2017 Harry is kind of pathetic don't you think? When you make a Dark! character it's expected you'll try to differentiate him from his canon self, and yet here he is randomly being desperate for friendship. To the point that he would defy his normal behavior of not acting without benefit and befriending a completely random girl. He then betrays a request of the second friend so as to not loose the first random friendship he made(And why was it even bothering Blaise? It's not like they have an open and honest relationship or anything)... I could accept this if you had introduced him as being lonely, but no where at the start of this story did you hint that he wasn't completely fine with being the social pariah with no friends. In fact, that seemed to be his desired lifestyle with the way he avoided the other orphans, ignored the outgoing Hermione when he first met her, and straight up told Blaise when he first saw him that he wasn't interested in talking to anyone. In fact, those scenes are why I'm tossing around the word 'random' so often... |