This is the third or fourth time I'm reading this and I thought I might as well review!
I love it, and it deserves wayyyy more than a few reviews!
Like everyone else has said, you have kept everyone wonderfully (and most importantly BELIEVABLY) in character, albeit with slightly more mature vocabularies XD
Karen has really grown on me, and actually has a lot of depth to her; you'd think she was a canon character!
I hope that you continue with stories in this 'verse in the future :)

This is the best thing I've ever read!

Awesome stories dude. Best Thomas FanFiction Ever! :D

I'd really love to see a sequel to this, focusing on the relationships between Thomas and Rose, Molly and Edward, Karen and Patrick, Toby and Mavis, and most importantly, Henry and Emily.

Keep up the great work! :)

Lee m

I've read every chapter in this story and you've done a great job. You've really made the Island of Sodor your own place while keeping the original feel of it. The way the characters interact with each other seems like how they'd really act. The scenes weren't hard to imagine. Like when Karen was ripping into Duncan I could imagine the look on his face. I look forward to future works from you!

...Oh my gosh. I don't even know WHERE to begin.

First of all, I nearly screamed early in the morn with glee knowing you finished your story and posted it, I pushed everything I usually do in the morning away to read this. MuaHaha.

Every chapter was just...magnificent, it kept me laughing ,serious and heart thumping suspense at the same time, I love how you kept every engine included, not one excluded. You once again kept them in their best character. (The swears were a nice touch,heh.) And most importantly you just had great grammer and spelling, a dying trait in the internet these days. Heh.

Anyways, I can't play favorites with the chapters since they were all great, I really grown to Karen since I at first thought she was a little bad engine, good thing she wasn't!

And the relationships amongst everyone was just too cute-talking of which, I saw what you did there, as much as I adore EmilyxDiesel, I couldn't help but cheer for HenryxEmily in this one *shakes fist* You're brainwashin' me here! Hahaha, just kidding, the way you written their actions and thoughts made them most compatible pair, I loved it.

And, well I hoped you don't mind, I had to keep this printed, even though my printer just had papers flying and I had to orginize them one by one-not pretty, hehheh.

I seriously hope you write more stories in the future, you got this awesome way of writing, I just can't stop reading! It really got me in an inspirational mood- Good timing too since I was like, dead these past days.

Anyways, Thanks for sharing man, I needed a good story to read, I most likely keep reading this over and over for a while.

...Toby and Mavis making out DO TELL next time! *poke* Heh heh.

And James being Ghey- I couldn't help but hear Alec Baldwins voice. But seriously it was pretty hot. SHH I said nothing!