Reviews for Intentions
ae2000x chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
oh a lot of FEELS here. toph and zu having a care time. and zu trying to get along with everyone so they all succeed. I love all of this. the funny part was with sokka like LOL
ae2000x chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
intriguing!
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I liked that.

-Dyslexic Nerd
Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Very introspective, I like it.
CinnamonStuff chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Very, very nice story. The Zuko-Sokka kinda surprised me, I was glad you focused on Toph later on.

Your sentences are beautifully formed. That one about Toph's lovers? (found someone, he's taken, found someone else, taken too, a third: also taken) Amazing. I think it perfectly reflects how lonely Toph is sometimes. (you portrayed her character very well during the whole story, by the way)

Thank you for writing!

Xx
SolarinStudio chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I love Toph.

I like the way you portrayed her here; she seems equal parts vulnerable and commanding.

Its amazing how much love Sokka and Zuko get (They seem to be the object of MANY fanpairings) but it kind of bums me out that Toph always seems out of the loop. First, there is Aang, but he gets Katara. Then there is Sokka, but he gets Suki. Then we have Zuko, who gets Mai. (Though I do have to say that Tokka is probably my favorite non-canon pairing.)

Kudos on this story! Does it count as 'official canon' for your fanfiction, or is it a one-shot with no bearing on your other stories?
Karkadinn chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Getting a review, even though not much has happened yet and it's a short chapter, purely due to the strength of the last two paragraphs. ;) That was some powerful prose right there. Please do keep it up; the balance between soap operatic angst and sentimentality is such a delicate rope to traverse...
Frith chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Haha, cute. I liked.
InoSakuShine chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Very, very, very very very cute. And insightful.
Random Reviewer chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
This is really well written, and could really fit into the canon Avatar storyline! Great job, I love Toph and Zuko! _ Keep up the good work!
Pinky Lillix chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Great understanding of Toph in this; I love it. Very well written, in-character, and a very enjoyable read.
edlovesjuicyfruit73 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Why, hello there. I stumbled upon this story, to my grateful...ness. XD

I really love your word choice and everyone is mostly in character. I really like where it's going, but I have a few picky things here and there. So, I'll give you a little concrit for you to consider.

One: Avatar is TV Y-7. I highly doubt Sokka and Suki were going to sleep together. I'm sure it was a romantic moment and that they were just going to cuddle and like kiss and stuff... But hey, your perception is your perception. And it is fanfiction after all. I just think that's too grown up for them.

Two: I can't see Toph saying ass. I really can't. Maybe if she were older, or if the characters were less innocent it could be done, but I don't know that I could see that actually happening.

Either way, I love it so far. I always search high and low for great ZukoxToph moments. Nicely done, and great job! Please, write more!

~Juicy

P.S. This isn't a oneshot is it? (
DreamCatcher16 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
“That’s the trouble. I’ve already found someone. But he’s taken. Then someone else. And he’s taken too. And…well…a third. Who is also taken.”

That really hit home. That sentence alone really makes you understand how lonely toph must get.
bloodstar chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Good story!

Heh...everybody wants to sleep with Sokka. lol